The One to Conquer Queen

INTRODUCTION: I have been writing adult fanfiction for a while, but this is my first attempt at publishing my work on the Internet. I'm open to writing about interesting pairings (especially in Suikoden), so feel free to submit a challenge if you like this story.

Rating: NC-17 (for explicit descriptions of sex, hints of non-consensual activity, bondage, etc.)
Pairing: Elaine x Queen (Suikoden III)
Summary: Although their rivalry had been ongoing for years, Queen finally pushes Elaine too far. Being no match on the battlefield, Elaine decides to subdue her opponent on own her terms (whether Queen agrees or not!).


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The One to Conquer Queen

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Years ago she enjoyed childhood as an aristocrat of Sanady. After the Harmonians had conquered the country, however, she learned to live as a third-class citizen, the comforts of life robbed from her. Queen matured into a woman without the luxuries that should have been her's by inheritance. Her talent with the sword developed from the time of her parents' deaths; the horrors of the Harmonian invasion combined with the necessary hardships of fighting changed her from a delicate girl to a seasoned warrior. Even though Harmonia was responsible for her suffering, she served in the Southern Frontier Defense Force: partly for her love of adventure, but mostly for her loyalty to the leader of the Twelfth Unit, Geddoe.

Initially Queen had agreed to join Geddoe for his reputation as a self-disciplined stoic. However, the months of fighting alongside him transformed her respect for him into feelings more akin to love. He was her leader, a comrade--but at the root of her heart she wished to one day feel his lips, run fingers through his coarse, black hair, watch his bare chest rise and fall in slumber...

The Twelfth Unit travelled together, fought together, ate and slept together. Nevertheless, their leader was no less enigmatic than when they had first joined him. Queen doubted that Geddoe would ever shed the veil of secrecy for another human, and contented herself to merely remain by his side, following him into countless dangers.


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"Right, so some extra medicine, antitoxin..." Queen murmurred to herself while checking the list Geddoe had given her. People hurried by her on the busy streets of Vinay del Zexay, merchants exchanged goods for potch, children chased each other while playing. Pausing, she let her vision stray to the port, then the sea beyond, a breeze playing with the loose whisps of her ebony hair.

As her eyes became absorbed in the sea's currents, tossing and sweeping across the distance, her thoughts also drifted to Geddoe, waiting at the inn, perhaps enjoying a drink at the tavern, the stern line of his jaw resting against one hand... Shaking her head, she completed her trek to Vinay del Zexay's primary shop for travel.

Queen browsed through the shelves of the store, trying to discern the scribbled labels of the medicine bottles. "Geddoe said...something about a balm with Karaya herbs..."

"What's that, hun? Needing something to spice up that stiff captain of your's?"

The sound of the teasing voice caused Queen's shoulders to stiffen visibly. "Elaine," she said with venom, "what are you doing here? The Fourteenth Unit wasn't assigned to patrol this area."

Raising her eyes, Queen found her rival leaning casually against a shelf at the end of the aisle. Elaine was a member of the Fourteenth Unit of the Southern Frontier Defense Force, and possessed a reputation as the most seductive woman working on Harmonia's borders. Blonde hair framed the elegant white of her exposed collarbone, neck, and the radiant beauty of her face. For that line of work, one would expect a woman to wear sturdy clothing to endure both the elements and the battlefield. However, Elaine flaunted her generous bust, the rounds of flesh always testing the tight, scarlet bustier she wore regardless of the circumstances.

"I'm always surprised that you seem incapable of feeling any shame," Queen replied as her eyes narrowed, obvious disgust in her voice. "Do you get any work done dressed like that? Or is distracting men on the front-line your idea of work?"

"Jealous, are we?" Elaine shot back. Her cheeks flushed red in indignation despite the cockiness of her tone. "Do I steal your thunder, Queen? Maybe you wished for a little womanly charm? If you weren't so plain and masculine, you wouldn't fail so miserably when trying to win a little attention from your Geddoe?"

Regardless of the insults, Elaine had always envied Queen's beauty and skill in combat. She had witnessed Queen in battle during several occasions, the fierce determination in the woman's dark eyes, the muscles trained skillfully for movement and power. Queen held no special sway over the men like Elaine, but her body was definitely more than that of a warrior; there was feminine appeal, if only she was less conservative about her clothing.

"I could exchange childish insults with you all day, but my unit will need me back with these supplies. Some of us have more pressing matters than finding men with loose purse-strings, and looser morals," Queen snapped, turning away from the other woman.

As she watched Queen dump a handful of potch onto the shop counter and exit the shop, Elaine felt her anger boiling. How dare she! That woman was too proud... Concentrating on the store's stock, Elaine picked up a few items, all the while plotting revenge on her long-time rival.


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Rounding a corner on her route back to the inn, Queen noticed a pair of children staring worriedly at the upper story of a building. She passed by, trailing her eye in the direction of their's, trying to recognize the object of their attention.

"Hey, miss," one child said to her, tugging lightly on her pants, "our cat got up in that attic of the warehouse over there. You think you could get it for us? Our parents'll be screaming if they find we've been playing there again."

Both children stared regretfully at the ground, and Queen tried a reasurring smile. "Your cat got stuck up the attic, did it? Don't worry, I'll see what I can do."

"Thanks a lot!" the child replied excitedly, nodding to his friend. "If you go in the back, there's a ladder that goes all the way up to the attic."

Ruffling the child's hair, Queen headed in the direction of where he had pointed, down a long alley littered with hay and random children's toys. Sure enough at the back, a ladder led to an upper area of the building through a window. She climbed quickly, reminding herself that she should be back at the inn by nightfall, lest she worry her comrades.

The floorboards beneath her boots whined as she made her way through a maze of crates. Listening intently for the sounds of another creature, Queen soon heard a creak from somewhere at the back of the attic, far from where the single window offering light. At the back wall, her eyes traced the outlines of objects, attempting to make out a feline figure.

With only a moment to gasp, Queen heard the sound of crates tumbling towards her. A wall of the wooden boxes suddenly toppled onto her, burying her in momentary unconsciousness.


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Slowly, Queen drifted back into consciousness. First, smell. The air was thick with the musty dust of the attic. Next her eyelids raised, and she noticed a single candle laying thin light across the shadowed forms of the room. The scream was muffled in her throat by a dirty rag, however, when she realized her clothing had been stripped of her. White light of the candle kissed her exposed thighs, traced outlines on her heaving breasts. Her body was tied to a rectangular frame, arms and legs spread taut by her restraints, thick climbing rope chaffing the skin. She tested the strength of the bindings, but realized that someone had tied them expertly, the knots would not give in to her struggling. The rough edges of the wooden floor grazed her back.

"Oh, little Queen's been caught in my web, has she?"

As she always did when she heard that voice, Queen stiffened. Elaine slipped out from behind a still-standing row of crates, her bare breasts exposed to the night air. The nipples had grown stiff on her white skin, accented by shadows cast from the candlight. She moved toward her prey with measured steps, blonde hair showing between her hips as she approached.

Queen stared up at the woman with mixed anger and confusion; what was Elaine doing?

Elaine kneeled between Queen's legs, one hand on each of her rival's spread thighs. Her eyes worked their way down Queen's body, as if she were inspecting a piece of meat. Nodding in satisfaction, she laid next to Queen, one arm stretched across the woman's shoulders, her legs wrapped around one leg. Queen squirmed and gave a muffled protest, feeling not only Elaine's naked body, but also the wet folds of the blonde pressed against her own thigh.

"Do you know what this is, Queen?" Elaine asked, pressing the side of her neck against the woman's face. The bound woman was overwhelmed by a floral scent that tickled the skin between her stomach and legs. "It's an aphrodisiac. Imported all the way from the Scarlet Moon Empire. Expensive stuff; must've cost me a month's pay." Elaine raked nailed across Queen's bare stomach, watching the skin shiver. "I'm letting you have it because I know you'll need it. You need to learn to...relax." Elaine's hand trailed farther, now stroking the tender skin inside Queen's thigh.

Queen struggled once more against the bindings, turning eyes of hatred towards her captor.

"Why so angry? How long has it been since you've enjoyed the touch of another body?" Elaine sat up, letting her fingers play with one of Queen's breasts. She kneaded the tender flesh, watched as the nipple hardened like a small pebble. Queen turned her face away. "Were you saving yourself for that stiff captain?" She leaned her lips towards Queen's cheek, letting the words bite at her ear. "You were waiting for him...to give you a good--hard--fuck, weren't you?"

Elaine straddled Queen's stomach, and the woman beneath squirmed again, feeling the warm, wet heat between Elaine's legs kissing her own skin. As she spoke, Elaine roughly grabbed both of Queen's breasts, one in each hand, rubbing the nipples with her thumbs. "You think a man can pleasure you like a woman?" She let her nails dig into the raw flesh. "Believe me, I know ways to make your body cry for pleasure. I'll make you forget men; after tonight, it'll be me haunting your dreams."

Sliding down her body, Elaine raked nails across Queen's stomach again, this time hard enough to leave red trails on the faultless skin. She parted Queen's lower lips with two fingers, feeling the violent struggle of the woman against her bonds. The folds were pink, healthy... Elaine slid her tongue into the depths of the flesh, tasting the beginning of a salty moisture, breathing the scent of a woman's excitement. The muscles of Queen's body spasmed as the tongue pressed itself towards her clitoris, rubbing against it, before burying inside. As the tongue snaked between the folds, Queen continued to twist against the ropes, wanting desperately to pull her legs together, get rid of the flesh in her flesh, the wet saliva joining her own wet juices. Teeth grazed against the soft tissue between her spread lips and she fought off thoughts of desire.

After tasting the woman, Elaine moved her tongue back to the clitoris, rubbing it intently as she thrust two fingers between Queen's legs. Heat shot through Queen's body, her back arching painfully, her eyes rolling back. Pleasure tickled at her senses. Between labored breaths, her throat emitted soft cries behind the rag. Elaine set to thrusting her fingers with her own heartbeat, grinning triumphantly as she watched Queen's hips meet the rhythm.

"That's more like it," Elaine said, withdrawing her fingers and pressing them to her tongue. She licked Queen's heat off of her fingers slowly, savoring the humiliation of her rival, watching as tears burned at the edges of Queen's eyes. "But it's not enough, is it? Is there something more you want?"

A muffled reply came from Queen's gagged mouth. "Ah, silly me. Can't really hear you with that in the way." Elaine removed the rag. She put her hands on either side of Queen's body, then pressed the top of her thigh between Queen's legs, smashing against the hot, wet flesh. Without hesitation, a moan escaped Queen's legs, and she began grinding herself against Elaine's offered thigh, using the strength of her hips to raise and lower herself.

"Not so fast, Queen." Elaine withdrew her leg and laughed as her rival gave a cry of yearning. "Tell me... You've always been so eager to use that mouth of your's... Tell me, what do you want?"

Queen's eyes met Elaine's, the usually clear ebony clouded by tears and passion. "I want your body." Her voice was hoarse, throaty from the strong desire overwhelming her body.

"Good girl." Elaine chuckled. "I think you can behave now that you know what's best." Reaching for a knife she had placed nearby, Elaine quickly cut the restraints at Queen's ankles. However, before she could finish with the ropes at the wrists, Queen wrapped her legs around Elaine's torso, thrusting her hips to allow her spread lips contact with skin.

Finishing the last two ropes, Elaine was nearly caught off guard as Queen sprung up, wrapping an arm around her back, the other hand grabbing fiearly at blonde hair as Queen pressed her mouth savagely to Elaine's own painted-rouge lips. They wrestled against each other's mouths, their tongues embraced in hard caresses. The tops of Elaine's breasts had always peeked out of her bustier; Queen had admired the perfection of the flesh, but now she had full access to the soft mounds. She broke away from the violent kiss and grabbed one of Elaine's breasts in her mouth, nipping softly with her teeth while stroking the nipple with her tongue. Elaine tangled her fingers in Queen's black hair, feeling the features of the woman's face pressed into her body. The warmth of Queen's mouth brought her attention to the growing heat between her legs, an itch she wanted Queen to scratch.

Pulling away, Elaine reached for her sword. Queen noticed and followed suit, retrieving her weapon from where it laid beside Elaine's. Taking the sheathed blade in her hands, Elaine pushed Queen to the ground and began inserting the hilt of the sword between Queen's legs. The width of the hilt caused Queen's breath to catch, her eyes widened as metal expanded the walls inside her, burying deeper and deeper towards her core. She cried as pain and pleasure washed over her body before thrusting the hilt of her own sword between Elaine's legs. Elaine moaned in pleasure as the rough binding of the hilt tore at her walls, her body attempting to stretch itself to accomodate the thick shaft of the hilt. Clutching the sheathed blade in sweaty palms, Queen began jerking the hilt in and out of Elaine, her rival soon following suit. Elaine rammed the shaft into Queen violently, penetrating through her soft, womanly flesh with the entire length of the sword-handle. Queen pounded back with equal power, thrusting the hilt as though she attended to split the other woman in half.

Noticing that Queen's breathing became even more ragged, Elaine pulled the hilt all the way to Queen's outer lips then plunged it in full-force, filling Queen to the brim, pushing her past the edge, a throaty moan and shivers accompanying her orgasm.

Elaine trailed fingers across the sweat formed at Queen's brow, grinning. Queen caught Elaine's hands, brought it to her mouth so she could lay a kiss on the slick palm, even as she felt the bruises ache between her legs.

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