rate_review Reviews

Okay this story was just funny as hell to read. Yeoman Chambers' response to every problem was just priceless. I could totally see Jack doing this, save the galaxy but still make the entire galaxy her bitch at the same time. Awesome.

lol,crazy but as long as Jack wins it's all good.

You really hate Miranda don't you? Anyways, it was a lol-wtf? fest.

I have only one reaction.

o_O

Lolwut?

That was surprisingly good! (Well, Jacob's head on a Varren was a terrifying mental image) I need to check out the kink meme more often if this is the sort of stuff they're bandying about.

Also, Simpsons and (Possibly) a CWC reference in the second chapter? Between that and your "Making a Mistake" story, you're becoming one of my favourite writers on here.

That was... sorta random. I was confused by the whole thing, was it real or was it all a dream?

Either way, still pretty hot. Good work I guess.