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September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol Only one chapter left, huh? Well, since there's no so much mushy-stuff, it makes sense to make this short, sweet and to-the-point. Very to-the-point. XD
I'm looking forward to it, tho. =3
I'm looking forward to it, tho. =3
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September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is getting hott! Oh Razor, you so sly it's not even fair!
I shall now stalk this story until it's updated, it's getting this good.
I shall now stalk this story until it's updated, it's getting this good.
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm starting to like this story, I really am. But I gotta be honest, the only question on my mind is "when are they gonna do it?"
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Jak... He really doesn't have a lot of friends, does he? And no, Jinx doesn't count on any level. Just saying right now. Then again, with friends like that...I wouldn't want to many of them running around, now that I think about it...
This is totally twisting my brain, though I'm completely behind snarky-Jak. He needs to be growl-ly/sarcastic at someone who'll actually get it. And I totally want to see how Razer responds to Dark and Light. That should be interesting.
And yes, you're totally justified in throwing pie at this point. I support!!
This is totally twisting my brain, though I'm completely behind snarky-Jak. He needs to be growl-ly/sarcastic at someone who'll actually get it. And I totally want to see how Razer responds to Dark and Light. That should be interesting.
And yes, you're totally justified in throwing pie at this point. I support!!
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Interesting..." Riiiiight~ XD lol This is gonna be fun to watch. X3
Lookin' forward to it! ^w^
Lookin' forward to it! ^w^
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June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that you did something so different from every other thing I've read for this game so far. I love your portrail of Jak I seriously think it's believable as is Razor. I expecially liked the "ripping their spines out an using them to beat her to death" part. I will deffenatly be eagerly awaiting the next chapters I really hope you don't lose steam on this fic. I never comment.... so I hope I've given you even a margin of what I think lol
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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! I knew Robin was writing. I've read all her stuff and I just knew it. .3
Anyhow, I haven't beaten Jak X yet, but I did sorta guess how it'd end. And did Razer become more of a dick towards the end?
Cuz the way Robin wrote him seems more dickish than I remember. Oh well.
It was good, though, and I can't wait to see how this "romance" turns out.
But... Robin! Keep writing "Pet"! I need my additction to hermaphroditic ottsels fed! :V
Anyhow, I haven't beaten Jak X yet, but I did sorta guess how it'd end. And did Razer become more of a dick towards the end?
Cuz the way Robin wrote him seems more dickish than I remember. Oh well.
It was good, though, and I can't wait to see how this "romance" turns out.
But... Robin! Keep writing "Pet"! I need my additction to hermaphroditic ottsels fed! :V
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
roflmao XD Yeah, after reading fic after fic of Jaxter, this is pretty much an about-face as far as pairings go in this corner of Naughty Dog's universe goes. X3 But it DOES have potential~ ;3
It helps that the comedic elements are spot-on, as always. XD
Until later! ^w^
It helps that the comedic elements are spot-on, as always. XD
Until later! ^w^
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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HA! OMG, this story? Will be hilarious.
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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What...the... ...no, nevermind. I don't want to know where this came from, but I am kinda interested in where it's going. I think I'm gonna have nightmares, though. Jak and Razor is just something I don't see beyond the begrudging "you're good so you're worthy of being a rival" type relationship. But who knows? Maybe this will change that. As long as you two are having fun, we should have fun, too.