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Ha! That ending was great. Can't wait for another chapter!

roflmao You're right! Razer WILL have to call a truce with Daxter if he wants in Jak's pants! XD And if he thinks Jak is bad now, Dax'll be even worse. He'll have to be reminded to breathe between barbs, poor little guy. X3

lol This made my night. Totally. :3 Until later. ^w^

Bacon and eggs? I feel so special!!

Bwahahaha! I loved this chapter. Keira and Jak's banter was great. And oh, yes, Razer is in for some real hell when Daxter returns, but I'm sure the poor injured man can get a little somethin' somethin' out of Jak before the master of cock blocking reclaims his throne on Jak's shoulder.

This is one of the best collaborations that I've read. I really do hope it gets finished. I think it's quite a nice premise, humorous, and refreshing. I think the only thing a little awkward is the method of removing Keira from the equation (given that she does show considerable interest in Jak during Jak X), but otherwise I've loved all the little details brought up.

I honestly think there's more to be written about, in this fandom, but then I'm working on like... 7 stories at once, kind of, and have been refraining from reading most (but not all, obviously) of what is out there. (I haven't posted anything yet because I keep hopping between stories and leaving some longer chapters unfinished between hops, and sometimes skipping around between chronological order, so I'm trying to make myself finish something first, just to guarantee I don't screw up and forget anything.)

Er, um... but enough about me. I realize y'all are pretty prolific, and it is possible to run out of ideas, but you're some of the best writers, at any rate. :3

Whomever of you two wrote that about stopping to write for this fandom...noooo D: You two are the last people who write good stuff for this, and Robin's fics are on my daily lecture since YEARS! Oh noo..

Awww I think its mint how when everyone writes about Jak he's always still a virgin. :)

Really enjoying this one, Room and Board and I think the other current one is Keep Talking? Its either Talk to Me or Keep Talking whichever one is currently in the making.

That was one long stalk. And now I want bacon and eggs too!

lol Nice. Pet, wife, ex-wife, to pet again in a snap. XD So cute.

Yeah, I can't blame you for wanting to move on. It's been forever since the series came out, and there's been nothing new in ages. Just please, PLEASE finish Keep Talking and Room and Board before you do. Pretty please? *wibble*

Ya need to update this soon. Its been awhile.