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The backstory pieces (the accusation and man in shadow) seems to break the sequence of such a short segment. I would have preferred more about why he was here or why he didn't know his own past to a combat. A few things could still be cleaned up, even if late, like a double period or a homonym used, but it is an interesting start.

Good use of the prompt - there's a lot of sand, it's relevant to the story and parts of it have pretty good desert atmospherics. Hope he proves his innocence!

Welcome to the Weekly prompts! Very interesting story, dear. I have no clue who these characters are but very much want to read more about them, and you've left the door open quite nicely to continue this. Good job! Thanks for sharing, PW

Welcome to the prompts! Thanks for sharing :D