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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. It is a sad fact indeed that you aren't writing for Bioware. The tenderness and desire between the two was beautiful and I like the gentle tension between them before that nervousness is broken. I love the banter and talk at the end as well. It felt... right. Sorry just don't really know how to describe it; the emotional ambiance was just perfect.