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by gingermaya

schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great fic!
person simplychaos
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another wonderfull story! thank you very much
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story! I honestly...need to take a little break afterwards :) Please write more!
person Anonymous
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I've read this story probably eight times. It is *hands down* the best Mass Effect story I've read so far. If you find it in your heart to write another story, I'll (and many others, I'm sure) will be waiting! ^_^

I know some writers like to have feedback to improve...but I can't find anything wrong with this.
person AliceInWonderland
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is probably the hottest Shep/Thane I've read so far and we all know there's some pretty amazing stuff out there. So well written too! I sincerely hope you'll continue with this, seeing how they're obviously not done with each other yet. ;) I hope the lack of reviews isn't putting you down, it seems to be an overall problem in aff.net that for one reason or another, as much hits as the fics get, people just don't leave any feedback.
person Excalibur
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love thane in the game.
i havent beat ME2 yet. but im going to catch up on it today. *muttering* damn job.
anyways. i love the way you portrayed him.
exactly like the game. quiet and seductive. especially his gravelly 2 toned voice. Rrrrrawr. *grin*

please make more.
you know what? u dont even need to wait for more people to say the same as i.
just for me. cuz u luv me. *beaming smile* lol

Extra Sincerely (extra... THATS how serious i am)
Excalibur