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for Never Have I Ever

by raefactor

person Anon
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe you wrote both of these great stories in one night! I really liked your characterisations, particularly your take on Lara's more manipulative side - but let's face it, it's true. She could talk almost any man into doing virtually anything if she put her mind to it! And the way you flesh out & contrast Zip and Alister's characters & pasts in the drinking game was very funny. Hope you write some more soon - maybe some of Lara's exploits with Amanda??