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for That which was Lost

by YeaCircus

person Orsinox
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A good start to be certain. No grammar or spelling errors, which is a lot more important than you might think. And the characters sound like the actual characters. They speak and act like you would expect in the game. Very well done. My only complain would be that the chapters are a bit too short. It wouldn't hurt to add a little more with each entry. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Sincerely,
Hex