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for Walters Paradise

by brokensilence

schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! The drug addict and the homicidal maniac are falling for each other! LOL! That was a very sweet scene! And poor Alex...maybe Elle should go and make him feel all better? ;)
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong that I find Walter and Lisa to be cute?
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOLz! XD Nice banter! Harry is so good at making Alex look like a dumbass!
person ScarletRibbons
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I didnt think i would be able to get into this so well, the male slash i like it was the female stuff i was a bit concerned with but its excellent! Please tell me there is more, i wish i had found this sooner!
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So Alex/Walter is in the next chapter? GET TO IT! On a side note I am really liking the way that every one is interacting so please keep this up?
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD!!! I LOVE the Harry/Alex banter! I fell over laughing when I read the part where Harry practically calls him a retard! Silly surly Alex! ^_^ Oh, man, this is getting better and better. The relationships are subtle, but they are there. Elle and Alex are in denial, Angela is warming up to Harry, and Walter SO wants Lisa, and I don't blame him! I mean, she's adorable! I have to admit, my favorite character is Harry because of his cool demeanor, quickly followed by Alex because of how easy he is to irritate! I could almost imagine Alex's face when the dice were rolled, kinda like a : "Oh no you DIDN'T!" sort of expression! I can't wait to read it! Walter is going to make him crazy! XD
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well it's interesting so far, sadly you double posted ch. 6. And it's kind of odd to see Walter trying to make a family, he's going about it a really twisted way but then it's not like he'd know any better.
person hewhodestroysall
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So walter managed to accomplish his goal huh.

Seems like Heather or whoever isn't safe on earth hehaha.

keep up the good work.
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He's building special bonds between all of them, isn't he? What a weird family, LOL! I do like that Angela is becoming less of a spaz. She always kinda freaked me out with her ranting and raving and suicidal self-hatred. You make her a more likable character. I even like the details of her past, like why she wears long sleeves. And I still love how adorably indignant you've made Alex! He's the kind of guy you want to bully just to get a reaction out of him! And the scene with Elle and Walter is going to be intense, I can feel it. I love Walter and his nonchalance towards death and murder... He's so damn crazy he's sexy! XD
person DTE
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I like it very much. Can weplease see more Harry/Alex in the future? Maybe even a bit of Harry/Alex/Walter?
And thanks for accepting anonymous reviews, its a real pain trying to sign in when you keep forgetting your password. And your pen name. And your pseudonym. hehe.