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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those lucky bitches! Why does Walter have to be so scary cute? WHY?! I so want to play with that man's hair! That was a total "Awwww" chapter, now that everyone is getting more honest to themselves! YAY! Alex should just accept that his woman is a bondage queenand accomodate her! lol
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I go away for a few days, and what do I miss? Whippings and orgasms, that's what! lol Good times in both chapters! Yay for Alex FINALLY letting Elle know how he feels for her! Geez! And yay for Walter's ingenious plans...he makes me so damn happy! Why does he posture so much? He's friggin' sweetheart! Mental, a little insane, but he's a sweetheart! He was so good to Angela! Lisa just needs to corner Walter and have her way with him under the excuse of: Nurse Lisa needs to do a thorough exam...Yay!
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the story. I admit I was iffy about the game mechanism at first, and it still kind of rubs me the wrong way (because the image of Walter playing dice is just weird), but I'm liking seeing all the different characters interacting with each other in one story. There aren't enough stories like that around.
One of the things about Silent Hill is that it doesn't really leave much room for the different characters to interact with each other. With fandoms like Star Wars or other series (just using a favorite of mine as an example), there are plenty of useful situations where the different characters can all interact with each other. With Silent Hill, it really is such an isolated journey in the games, that it leaves few opportunities for protagonists from different games to interact with each other, and that makes it tough for fanfics. And of course, it makes it even tougher for smut! ;D So, it's great to see a story like this with the different characters participating here. Especially Lisa. There isn't enough Lisa smut around.
Although, it's rather disturbing to see Lisa developing a crush on Walter. There's something wrong with that girl. >_> (And I'm a huge Lisa fan!)
Plot wise, I empathize with Alex and Elle. Alex strikes me as he was in the game. He's got something going on for Elle, but he's afraid to say it. And he's oblivious to Elle's feelings, despite her hints. He's a blockhead, but it's still hard to see him suffer under the experiences Walter puts him through. I'm also starting to look kinder on Walter, which is rather disturbing, as I usually consider him to be evil embodied, despite having a tragic past. I do have to wonder how Walter thinks Harry can achieve his goal, because there's no way to do that except bringing Heather there. And bring Heather there is not an optimal situation, as much as I'd like to see it - I can imagine her horror when she finds out all the things that go on there. ;) Maybe he means he wants Harry to see these new people as family? I guess I'll find out.
One of the things about Silent Hill is that it doesn't really leave much room for the different characters to interact with each other. With fandoms like Star Wars or other series (just using a favorite of mine as an example), there are plenty of useful situations where the different characters can all interact with each other. With Silent Hill, it really is such an isolated journey in the games, that it leaves few opportunities for protagonists from different games to interact with each other, and that makes it tough for fanfics. And of course, it makes it even tougher for smut! ;D So, it's great to see a story like this with the different characters participating here. Especially Lisa. There isn't enough Lisa smut around.
Although, it's rather disturbing to see Lisa developing a crush on Walter. There's something wrong with that girl. >_> (And I'm a huge Lisa fan!)
Plot wise, I empathize with Alex and Elle. Alex strikes me as he was in the game. He's got something going on for Elle, but he's afraid to say it. And he's oblivious to Elle's feelings, despite her hints. He's a blockhead, but it's still hard to see him suffer under the experiences Walter puts him through. I'm also starting to look kinder on Walter, which is rather disturbing, as I usually consider him to be evil embodied, despite having a tragic past. I do have to wonder how Walter thinks Harry can achieve his goal, because there's no way to do that except bringing Heather there. And bring Heather there is not an optimal situation, as much as I'd like to see it - I can imagine her horror when she finds out all the things that go on there. ;) Maybe he means he wants Harry to see these new people as family? I guess I'll find out.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty hot.
I did have an "Aww how cute" moment when Walter felt that little pang of guilt! ^_^ He's getting human again! How sweet! And I also felt a serious rush of dread with the result of the dice roll. Pretty intense, if you ask me! I'm surprised Angela didn't completely spaz out! But she is getting more comfortable...Hmmm...I am still SO loving Harry! Mehbe he should literally smack emo-kid Alex upside the head, then lock him in a linen closet with Elle! That'd show him! XD
I did have an "Aww how cute" moment when Walter felt that little pang of guilt! ^_^ He's getting human again! How sweet! And I also felt a serious rush of dread with the result of the dice roll. Pretty intense, if you ask me! I'm surprised Angela didn't completely spaz out! But she is getting more comfortable...Hmmm...I am still SO loving Harry! Mehbe he should literally smack emo-kid Alex upside the head, then lock him in a linen closet with Elle! That'd show him! XD
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry is just so damn awesome. Like, nothing fazes him to the point of freaking out. I love it! And now it is SO obvious everyone thinks Alex is an ass! XD I fell over laughing when Elle said :"Well he kinda deserved it!" and Angela agreed! Oh, BURN! Fabulous! I am so excited for the next chapter cuz I have a feeling Alex might just get riled up and do something about his infatuation with Elle, FINALLY! And I am totally looking ofrward to when Walter and Lisa finally get it on! Sexy fluff!
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O
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X3
*drooooooooooooooooooooooooooool*
Holy hell, that was awesome!!!!! XD This is why I love Walter so much! He's a psychopath, KNOWS he's a psychopath, and LIKES it! That scene with Kauffman was satisfying in too many ways to count! I would die of a stroke on the spot if Walter ever approached me and said, "Do you know why I'm here?" Instant death from fear, I tell you! He's a scary bastard, but he's shy with girls. How adorable is that?! Like a cuddly blood splattered teddy bear! ^_^ I want Lisa meself...heh heh. So vulnerable, so sweet! I loved Elle's little quip about Walter's return and Harry's complete lack of enthusiasm! XD He's gonna love it! I'M gonna love it!
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X3
*drooooooooooooooooooooooooooool*
Holy hell, that was awesome!!!!! XD This is why I love Walter so much! He's a psychopath, KNOWS he's a psychopath, and LIKES it! That scene with Kauffman was satisfying in too many ways to count! I would die of a stroke on the spot if Walter ever approached me and said, "Do you know why I'm here?" Instant death from fear, I tell you! He's a scary bastard, but he's shy with girls. How adorable is that?! Like a cuddly blood splattered teddy bear! ^_^ I want Lisa meself...heh heh. So vulnerable, so sweet! I loved Elle's little quip about Walter's return and Harry's complete lack of enthusiasm! XD He's gonna love it! I'M gonna love it!
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! <3
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww come on that's a bad place to leave us off. So when is the next chapter going to be posted?
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I missed the last update! It was cute, though! It kinda makes me want the guys to take on the girls' idea, LOL! Man orgy! ^_^ And this new chap was cute, too! Elle was totally turned on by the other girls and is in total denial! LOL! The relationship blooming between Lisa and Walter keeps making me think of songs from Beauty and the Beast "There's something sweet, and almost kind. But he was mean and he was coarse and unrefiiiined! And now he's dear, and so unsure. I wonder why I didn't see it there before." XD And now Walter is totally gonna PWN Kauffman! WHOO HOO!! It'd be awesome if he beat the living hell out of him, dragged him back to the house, and let Lisa have at him like a pinata! A fleshy bloody pinata! ^_^ They could have matching blood splatter on their faces! Awww! How are these dice rolls decided? Do you actually have dice you're using, cuz I want me a pair of those, lol! And if there are actual dice involved, then they hate Harry. His ass is not safe from them! GREAT for us, not so much for him! Looking forward to the next chap!
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I haven't even played any of the Silent Hill games and I think this story is all kinds of sexy and awesome! (I've been checking it ever since I first read it, chapter 5 was the latest up at the time) Sorry I don't have any constructive critique to add, but please keep going with this!