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by brokensilence

person SLM
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really good fanfic, is there going to be a sequel? I'd definatly like to see vincent, james, and maybe crazy claudia!
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is soo fucking disturbing that i love it, its kind of crazy to think dammed people do this stuff in afterlife but it is kinda of cool and hot
person Zombiegirl2007
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love this story Angela and Harry are perfect couple I would love Walter toucher James
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. Especially how you portrayed the characters. Omg, Harry and Alex just OWN. And whoa, Alex is kinky. It suits him.

I wouldn't mind seeing a different version of this plot. Like maybe all the villains of SH get together in their own mansion. >.> And then kidnapping their rivals and torturing them. <.< And stuff. *cough*
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind seeing more of Alex and Elle. There isn't a lot of fic with them out there, because I think not a lot of people enjoyed Silent Hill: Homecoming. So Harry and Angela (and the others) can see any dead person that they want? Does that mean that Harry can see Cybil or his wife? It'd be interesting to see whether Mrs. Mason approved of Harry and Angela, and what situations they could get into. ;D A lot of possible emotions to play with there, and definitely some things to be said about the way he handled the Cheryl situation. I also wonder what would happen if Heather died and ended up there; would she be accepting of Angela?

Of course, some of those things would put a downer on the story. But you're right, there are definitely a lot of possibilities. I would love to see what you could do with Harry and Angela, seeing as how they would now be settling into a daily domestic life, even though it's in the afterlife. Or Alex and Elle. I'm also curious as to exactly where they are now. Are they in Heaven? Or is this Walter's dimension still, just a part of it that can be accessed by the dead?
person Shoezies
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gahh..Harry is just so sweet...I know I've said it before, but seriously...And yay! Sequel!!
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good two chapters, with these last two updates. I can only speak for myself, but personally I'm wondering how much longer the story can go on. Walter's game seemed to be coming to an end, and indeed he just announced it at the end of this chapter. I'm wondering what his ultimate goal was, and what's going to happen to these characters now that they've fulfilled their purpose. None of them were really evil, so it was majorly unfair for them to be stuck in Hell. The only guess I have is that Walter was somehow trying to redeem himself for what he did, by helping these people purge their 'sins' and give themselves a second chance. But that doesn't fit with his goals in SH4. I'm also wondering what's happening outside this little reality he's created, namely with Heather. What's she doing while her dad is involved in this little game of switching partners?

I think a sequel depends on how you end it. I'd have to see the final chapter first, before deciding on whether I want a sequel, because obviously there are storyline details I'm missing here. I do wonder a lot how things would have gone if Alessa or Heather were involved in this (or both; with Alessa being an adult), though obviously that would have made for some awkward moments between Harry and the girl (whichever one he got stuck with). XD "Okay honey, just go there and have sex with the nice lady, while daddy stands here and watches." *snickers* (Yes, I have a SICK imagination. ;D)

(By the way, I'm Anthony from the previous review. I just wasn't logged in at the time. >_<)
person Shoe
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....This chapter went a lot smoother than I expected (I honestly thought Angela would really not go for this....) But Harry's such a frigging sweetheart! And, hell yes! I think a sequel is definitely in order! I personally think you could have a lot more fun with it, but that's just me! Great work!!!!
person Shoe
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I can't believe that Alex has to do that....Good thing she's been practicing lol....I love this fiction!
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Indeed yay for dumbass! XD Oh, that man...maybe he should sneak some of that strawberry sauce out of the kitchen and cover Elle's side of the bed with it! Whoops! And hooray for lesbian sundaes! They are rather tasty ;) I am SO looking forward to Lisa and Walter FINALLY getting freaky! It's gonna be great! ^_^