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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
8/10 I love Homer, so thanks for writing this. Pretty funny, and loved the ending. Now, this is a good "lesson" on how to write an erotic one-shot.
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't read other fanfics much despite writing them, but can say I liked what I read! Until I remembered who he was, I mistook Homer for Karl and started thinking "hmm, I wonder what Lynn would think of Edy having sex with her boyfriend?" If you add more chapters to this, you could do something in that vein. Just tossing the idea out!