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April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Compound sEx skill.
The story over all was good, but not amazing, in that I enjoyed it, but the characters still seemed a little off. I felt like more could've been done to fluff out the story a bit, but at the same time, this was pretty much just PWP with a bit of contrivance to make it feel more real. Not that that's a bad thing at all, but it misses what could come from a full blown story.
I really like this idea, it's just simply that I'd have liked to see it taken more in the context of a full story, versus an adult novella with sex being pretty much the full focus. It'd be interesting to see how all the different groups of people would react to a menage a trois forming from the three of them.
Either way, it's good entertainment, I can't deny that.
The story over all was good, but not amazing, in that I enjoyed it, but the characters still seemed a little off. I felt like more could've been done to fluff out the story a bit, but at the same time, this was pretty much just PWP with a bit of contrivance to make it feel more real. Not that that's a bad thing at all, but it misses what could come from a full blown story.
I really like this idea, it's just simply that I'd have liked to see it taken more in the context of a full story, versus an adult novella with sex being pretty much the full focus. It'd be interesting to see how all the different groups of people would react to a menage a trois forming from the three of them.
Either way, it's good entertainment, I can't deny that.
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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mhmm, mhmm... hot, sexy, sweet. The perfect climax, in more ways than one.
Do tell, have you a next project in line?
Do tell, have you a next project in line?
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February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet.
But when's it gonna get hard? All this UST can't be good for anyone!
But when's it gonna get hard? All this UST can't be good for anyone!
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You call this an update? Sheesh...
Interesting in terms of story, to be sure. But where's the sex? xD
Interesting in terms of story, to be sure. But where's the sex? xD
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What's next, they'll be doing it in front of strangers?
You have a knack for putting them in awkward and funny situations. Good job, and keep it up!
You have a knack for putting them in awkward and funny situations. Good job, and keep it up!
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sheena's so bad. It's great.
And corrupting innocent Collette! Even worse! lol
Ahh, but all that aside. You gave me a good laugh, and for that I thank you. *bows*
And corrupting innocent Collette! Even worse! lol
Ahh, but all that aside. You gave me a good laugh, and for that I thank you. *bows*
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So random. xD
But it has its sweet and tender moments. An excellent balance of humor and tenderness... well done, indeed.
But it has its sweet and tender moments. An excellent balance of humor and tenderness... well done, indeed.
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Surprisingly sweet and interesting from a character standpoint.
and, of course, totally hot. Good work.
and, of course, totally hot. Good work.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have literally been waiting for someone to make a Lloyd/Colette/Sheena lemon for *years*. So far, everything seems to be good. I like that you refuse to take things too seriously, though I doubt Lloyd's thoughts would ever be "I am the MAN!"
Anyway, glad to see you've updated, and I eagerly await more.
Anyway, glad to see you've updated, and I eagerly await more.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Booya, that was beautiful baby.