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for In My Eyes

by amskitty214

person Bbritishchik
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so glad to read another chapter. I always look forward to seeing this story updated. I love how you ya'll are writing it and I adore all of the pairings...well the Zex/Lux one I'm still getting used to, but its all good. ;) Can't wait to see a little Xem/Sai action too! Byes!
person SuicialTreefrog
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice *nod nod*
LET THE KINKY BUTT SHMEZZEHS ENSUE!!!!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Angsty and sexy with a semi-original plot. By-the-buy, I get the feeling you've never smoked pot before? There is so much coughing involved, and smoking it from a joint for a first timer would be loud. Trust me. At least you didn’t have them do the apple bong thing, like some of my friends do, even though it taste a lot better. Plus, you cannot hide the smell. I think it so would have been obvious what he was doing in the closet with Demyx. But, stoner Demyx is a nice touch.
person Bbritishchik
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy monkey! Hawt! Great chapter. As per usual, can't wait for next chapter, lol. Loving the speedy updates. ;)
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice with the truth or dare guys, but (don't kill me) it had so many possibilities that you gave up on! You could have had people come over or made it last longer and built up to the incest kiss thing a little more..... But keep up the good work guys!! Looking forward for the next chapter.

Parker Rowe
person Bbritishchik
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! I love how quick your updates are. Its nice not to have to wait months for one short chapter like some people. Anyways, This had just the right amount of angst to keep up the interest level, lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. Oh, and don't worry, I love the Demyx/Xigbar pairing myself. Your not alone! LOL. ;)
person Azriel
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! Very well written, and it doesn't have that cliche high school story feeling.
Can't wait for an update!
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice, just as the rest is. I got a shout out! I feel so special...... Keep up the good work guys. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Parker Rowe
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you guys are doing really, really good. Keep it up ok?
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Hopefully, you'll move onto Dem/Xig next?

...And please tell me that 7th review is a joke. No one's that stupid, right?