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Stupid Riku! Letting himself get fucked by Xenmas just so he can get Xenmas to fire Leon as a 'favor' just because Leon comforted Sora after he hit him! Riku doesn't deserve to call Sora, his! Sora would be better off with Leon then a evil-bitchy two-timeing filthy whore like that bastard Riku! Plus, calling Riku a whore is a inselt to other whores everywhere.

Yay, another update! This one was great and full of drama. Omg, poor Demy. I hope he doesn't end up getting AIDS. That would make me sad. I'm so glad we finally get to see Saix and Xemnas, squee. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!

First of all, let me say that the story is pretty good, its fun, nice, and rare of its kind. A story that is not too serious so you can enjoy it, but not plotless crap thats filled with random events that only sort of appear to connect. Good job on that one. However, I'm not sure about the AIDS thing. I mean, would she really figure that out so soon? Also I feel that it probably would have been more realistic if he showed no symptoms then just one day randomly passed out and such. Drug user or not, AIDS is almost never the first assumption when a person gets sick. Alas, I'm very interested to see what happens next. I'm not sure if I can deal with Riku being the bad guy, but then again I did play the game.

I love this fanfiction, it's currently one I search a lot when I get a chance to look at this site. :) Keep up the good job.

Amazing chapter, I was wondering when Xemnas and Saix were going to make their appearance in this wonderful tale. :) I love your whole tell you've spun thus far and look forward to some more amazing chapters.

HOT DAMN, YOO GAIZ. O3O HOT. FUCKING. DAMN. I'm falling so desperately in love with this story and all the characters in it. x3 You give them all such fiery and unique personalities, it's amazing. I almost fell off my couch when I read about Marly's outfit. xD That is so completely like him. God, your story makes me want t draw so bad. D: I want to draw Marly with a hot pink dress and fishnet. x3 maybe I'll draw him reaching down to take his shoe off and Loz has the other one in his hand, looking all cute and embarassed. >D And drunk Sora makes me giggle. He's such a little lightweight :3 But then again, so am I >__>;; I can't drink more than a swig of sake without falling very gracefully over my own feet. I'm fun to watch though xD I really love the Leon/Sora pairing so much. It's so rare @__@ and you do them remarkable justice. You should keep Leon around for a little bit ;D He needs to have a little chat with Riku, after all. You guys are just making me love every single character so much x3 Loz is so adorable and insecure. He's such a big teddy bear. And "Wild Rose"? Hot damn. Marluxia was a bigger whore than I ever thought possible! In the good way, though... if that's at all possible. I love how awkward they are together ^^ They make such a very cute couple. I can't wait to see how they progress in their relationship. ::dons a netted hat and hides in a shrub:: I should start keeping a log. ::tags Loz and Marluxia:: *Australian accent* What interesting creatures, these... "homosexuals". You see how the pink-haired woman... man... WELL, you see how [s]he touches his/her hand to the larger male? So intriguing! I must study them further. *Not Austalian accent* xD I'm sorry. I'm very slap happy and watching Stephen Lynch. It's not my fault, I swear! Anyways, hope you liked my rant! They seem to be getting progressively longer @__@ hope you don't mind ;D Keep up the amazing work, you guys. This is really such an inspiring and original story, it makes me want to cry ; A ; This made my whole week, btw xD For real. So sankyuu~ Much love ^^

This is great yall! (yes i'm from down south lol) but in chapter 2 i think it is you have axel and roxas talkin but when they go for a kiss you put axel and sora. Just thought yall should know. Kepp up the great writin though.

What!?! Easy target for what? I'm frightened for everyone Riku's around now. What's going on? I'm scared! T^T

HALLO?! O3O Wow you guys... just... wow xD IN THE GOOD WAY, DUN WORRY. Definately worth the wait, for sure. ^^ GOD you guys totally made me want to jump Luxord's junk @__@ I NEVER EVEN LIKED THE DUDE AND LOOK WHAT YOU DID ;A; You've created a monster, I hope you know. xD And Zexion is just so beyond cute, as per usual, so no surprise there. Haha I love Marly! x3 Of course he wouldn't care if a teacher was pedo'ing some kid. Is Marluxia gonna play a big part of the story later on?! :O Or is he just for the army of fangirl's entertainment? XD WTF RIKU ::HEADDESK:: AHH. >:[ What a filthy asshole jerkface. Axel needs to be his ass a few feet into the ground. OR BETTER YET, LET SORA DO IT. ::hops up and down:: Riku needs to be taken down a few pegs. AND I KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON THERE... well actually, I think everyone does. xD I think you'd have to be braindead to not pick it up >__>;; UHHHH anyways. I love stoner Demyx. xD you know, now that I think about it, he always kind of acted like a stoner... DANCE WATER, DANCE. ::throws a cup of water across the room:: o3o;; Well that didn't work. xD; And ohhh Ziggy-poo :3 you're so dirty ;] I'm glad you wrote more Zexy/Lexy smextime :D I was having violent yaoi withdrawls, and that's NEVER fun 8D I couldn't sleep, I was shaky and agitated >__>;; ::foams at the mouth:: WELP, I'm ranting again, it seems. Oops? xD I know you guys love it and I wanted to make an uber-spiffy review to say thanks for the smex I wanted. ^^ Amazing, as always. Can't wait for the next chapter! ::toddles away::

Hold on a sec while i pick m jaw up from the floor..................

Abosultely drop dead amazing! I'm really enjoying your work you guys :) I can't wait to see more!