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for Doppleganger

by beautifulblue

person creepy
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, I wonder what Sigmund will do about that!
person random
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah, cool!
person anonymous
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
finally, a fic with the doppleganger twins! Great work, btw.
person Kratos
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was hot. Nicely done!
person vanesa
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool chap can't wait for more
person Hilde
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Femmeslash! :D Oh man, you've made me so happy. XD

I'm not sure how you intend the story to end, but I find myself hoping Rayne escapes. Perhaps she could fail at first (leaving the Twins very angry..) but eventually succeeds in escaping? Well, whether she escapes or not, I'll enjoy reading it either way. :)
person random
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty good
person crazy
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah :o
person chicky
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was good except that you got "Butcheress's" name wrong. Her full name is Bathory Mengele in reference to the countess and Joseph Mengele
person creepy
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good.