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for Otasune Long story

by SnakeSeme

person Duelriel
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, the plot is wonderful... but I'm having some troubles with the grammar and some word choices.

Since I do love it, I was wondering if you would be interested in having a beta. I could edit the story for you, just making sure that there's correct word order and syntax. It wouldn't be rewriting, it would just be a little copy editing. Please email me at Kirkyott203@hotmail.com if you're interested!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read this fic some time ago and I LOVE IT! You're the best! :D
It sure helped me get inspired for my own fic! Are you on mgslash.com yet? If not, you should be! (I'm not sure if the site is really called that way, because they have moved, but you will get there using this address)!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I'm so hoping this story will get longer! I love it! ^__^