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for Burning Desire

by firehedgehog

person Rose
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Sora is now Takuya? wow so what well Riku do win he finds out Takuya is with Koji? Jealousy well Rise lol But yeah I do like Takuya and Koji tougher as a couple to maybe Sora wanted to have his own life not the one Destiny Pick out for him? but yeah good work on this one!.
person Abeoumbra
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your doin' wonderfully, though I hope you get more reviews, ne?
person Abeoumbra
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A bit of a short start m'dear, but otherwise this holds promise - this is my first review on AFF.Net, hope you continue this though!