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kick ass!

Oh man...that was hilarious.

I came up with a couple of good responses of my own for the quicksand parts.

The first quicksand part: Never go into the jungle. If the plants don't rape you, the quicksand will.
The second quicksand part: Quicksand 2: Electric Boogaloo or Quicksand 2: The Quickening. Lol...I got those ideas from ED

I might have to do a dramatic reading of this...not the MST part, the horrible part.

Hey guys,

Since you let me know that you were going another parody of my stories, let me know when you have your new one up please.

Hey guys. I just read that last comment you guys recived and felt that I could cheer you all up.


Don't worry about other peoples comments,



It was something I had to learn for myself when I was on FF.net, and also seeing that there are allot of funny YouTube Poops on the Zelda CDi games, it is all fair as it is all a parody.

So yeah, I know my writing style when I was first starting was not really good on the grammar area.

Also when I read it, I am reminded of how I first started out and was able to laugh at it.

As long as no one tried to steal my name, then it is all fine by me.

Also I am at peace now with the whole situation at ff.net, it was all a learning experience about the internet and in a way, I am thankful for it.

Hope you guys do a great parody and I don't mind if you make fun of my grammar,

you really, really should not make fun of someone's spelling and grammar. Not everyone can do that kind of editing themselves and it really has nothing to do with the story or characterization involved. It also moves into the realm of extremely tasteless and if you bothers you/you find it funny that much you can act as a beta-reader. Or alternatively you can go over to my profile and make fun of my spelling and grammar mistakes, or even better beta my work since you obviously have the time.

Lol! Cute Story.

Hahahahaha

I like how you made fun out of my story,

hope you do more.

xD