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for Kvar/Lloyd challenge fic

by Yamiyugikun

person Wimpy100
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank You for finally putting the conclusion! Even I feel like I couldn't write Kratos/Lloyd like that because I always end up in a fit of giggles and with everyone watching and breathing down my neck resulting to a good reason why a never posted a fic around. ^_______^'''''''''''' I read ch.5 of your Oyako fic and I loved how you started it! Zelos really needs to have art or fics thrown at him proving that he is indeed gay! I mean would a guy wearing pink prove that! And how Lloyd almost died saving Kratos made me cry and sing in happy joy! Anyways you write really good fics!

123(Wimpy100)
person Wimpy100
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this first half! I wonder what's going to happen now? What is Kratos going to do to Lloyd I wonder? Can't wait for the second half! Btw, you don't have to apologize for taking that long b/c I was pretty much busy and didn't have any time to get on the computer I just got on today to see this updated. ^_______^' Anyways, please continue.
P.S.: Why isn't anyone reviewing this other than reading it!? This deserves some reviews from others!
person Wimpy100
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the second chapter! As for the smutty version, I really would like to read it! Btw, for some reason last night My dreams gave me another fic challenge idea. They still won't leave me alone. Yes,this is another Kratos/Lloyd. Mostly a story plot right after Kratos betrays Lloyd and the others. While in Tethealla or in Zelos's mansion, Lloyd takes a bath unaware that Kratos is checking up on him and Kratos would start getting bad thoughts and then well rapes Lloyd in the process in the smutty/rough way. And I hope you'll still continue with Blood Bonds:An Angel's Love I still want to know when Kratos is going to rape/make love to Lloyd! I'll patiently wait! Much appreciated if you'll respond to my next Kratos/Lloyd chalenge! Thank You!

123(Wimpy100)
person Wimpy100
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU! THIS IS THE GREATEST! And besides, I really wanted to see one for once when I saw the 3rd OVA. So anyways, THANK YOU!

123(Wimpy100)