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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, and I can't wait for more. However, I thought the confrontation with Sora's mother was a little short, and I couldn't really get very into it emotionally. That could just be me though.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say get both of them back to the hideout and make them live there. Be like cast-aways.
So what are the exactly.. are they witches/warlocks? Faries?(pun not intended) Demonic lunatics? XD Perhaps go a bit deeper into what Riku is. I'm not quite fully understanding how all the sudden Riku's family are cursed with the use of magic.
Keep it up~ dont forget to give Sora the FULL kit n' Kaboodle on what it's like to have a baby. And same goes for Riku as the father.
So what are the exactly.. are they witches/warlocks? Faries?(pun not intended) Demonic lunatics? XD Perhaps go a bit deeper into what Riku is. I'm not quite fully understanding how all the sudden Riku's family are cursed with the use of magic.
Keep it up~ dont forget to give Sora the FULL kit n' Kaboodle on what it's like to have a baby. And same goes for Riku as the father.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah! Now I did not see her coming into the picture in this chapter ;D haha, homos. Every time kazaj laughed, I did too xD thanks for updating!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray conflict! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!!
cliff-hanger!
not cool!
I love this story so far :))
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol! this is awesome!! I'm more of an akuroku fan although i love the Sora x Riku pairing, and i haven't really read many stories that involved male preg. but this is really good!! I'm definatly going to keep reading! keep up the good work!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*de-lurk*
Keep this up! I find it amusing, though it does show that it’s been translated from an RP. However, each chapter gets progressively smoother with the narrative/dialogue transitions. Basically, I love watching your skills develop. So yeah, keep going with it!
*re-lurk*
Keep this up! I find it amusing, though it does show that it’s been translated from an RP. However, each chapter gets progressively smoother with the narrative/dialogue transitions. Basically, I love watching your skills develop. So yeah, keep going with it!
*re-lurk*
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really love where you're taking this. The angst and the drama is like food. I can't wait for more!
~Angee
~Angee
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORY!!! It's so inspiring to know that the same people I receive reviews from are the same people I also give reviews too...hehe! Well I did update my story today, so hopefully you'll read it and enjoy it!!!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And so the plot thickens o.o
Mpreg is so very interesting sometimes no?
Being a male myself though, I'm rather glad I can't get pregnant @.@
Mpreg is so very interesting sometimes no?
Being a male myself though, I'm rather glad I can't get pregnant @.@