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ACK!!!! There is no chapter 13!!!

And if you meant it to be a notice and not a chapter, there is no text to speak of. It contains the title of the chapter, and nothing else.

Maybe you threw in an extra 'less then' sign? (Or oposite of ">" symbol.)

Hope you can get it straightened out soon, I luff this story.

Good Luck!

why's it on hiatus? wait...you prob go to school right? cus i know for SOME reason, teachers r bein bitches n giving us LOADS of crap to do. I REALLY hope you get to this when you can. i don't care if its like half a yr from now cus well this is a sweet fic, i squealed all crazy like wen riku proposed, heh, loved it! anyway later gator!

I stumbled onto the fact that you had updated a new chapter totally by accident today (clicked the wrong link in my bookmarks list), but was pleasantly surprised! If what you've written up to this point is any indication of what's to come, I say keep up the good work! Just...don't make me late for work again...because reading this most recent chapter is doing just that!

:3 OH! thanks so much for writing! ;D I just can't wait to see what happens next.

I have never really read mpreg stories before as the thought always kind of irked me, but I decided to read this one out of morbid curiosity. Much to my surprise, I have ended up really enjoying it. I tore through all ten chapters that have already been posted in very little time last night and have been left wanting--craving, if you will--MORE. I am fairly new to the Kingdom Hearts fandom, having not even finished playing the first game, but already beeing in love with the characters of Riku and Sora (particularly Riku). Although this story is AU, very much seems to be in line with what I expected of the characters. Not that the story is predictable, but the characters all seem to be very familiar, like old friends, having the same sort of personality that I imagined they would. Keep up the good work! I have no clue when the last chapter was posted, but I hope the next chapter is post soon! (Also, though I have been reading on AFF for quite some time, I registered an account solely for the purpose of being able to review this story...)

OhMiGod i can't wait to see what happens next. this is an awesome story, and it's well written. the funny thing is i know all about being catholic cause i am one (but i don't want to be..), and I can relate because all the things that are against Sora and all the hypocritical actions are the reason i want to leave the church. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

This story truly is very exciting to read!
Your going to get chapter comments from me from now on :3
Can't wait to read more of this story <3

>B I loved reading this chapter! Thanks so much for writing it :] haha, I'd love to see that picture

I really love your story, and to think it helps me think. Considering I'm bi and I know my parents are just like Sora's. To tell the truth I'm scared to tell them. I guess the thing you wrot about God knew I was this way before I knew made so much sense to me. So please continue with the story^^ It's great^^

.:Yuki-san:.

man, Sora's mom is a bitch and a half. My mom is like super religious too. I mess with her head though so she thinks im a bad kid. "Sweetie, what're you doing on the computer?" "Watching lesbian porno mom, like i always do" anyway, i love your long chapters and how much plot they have.whats sex without plot? I like the bits of comedy and romance too, its cute.