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for Our Blessing

by Starryeyedstar

person Nyouko
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh just wanted to so like the story so far (I have got to like chapter 6). I also wanted to say when guys take the pregnancy test and it is postive It means they have a disease. I don't know what kind but I just wanted you to know.
person drcyrus
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally hooked. I love the way you're developing Sora's pregnancy. Can't wait til' next chap!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! you can't leave me hanging like this, it's cruel and inhumane, worse than a in character Seph on a bad and creative day. *Dies from anticipation* *rises from dead* please continue soon, this has me hooked and addicted and you'll be my favorite kingdom hearts author of all time. *dies again*
person noezel7
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates! I'm not mad at all that you didn't update this for a while. I've been known for not updating my stories for months on end. I know that you want to put out quality work instead of rushed crap just to make the fans happy! Riku seems so un-trusting. I mean I understand why he feels so, but why can't he just trust Sora and go with Tidus and Wakka? I'm really excited to see the baby shower! Poor Sora is going to drown the the estrogen in that room. Hope to see more from ya soon!
person noezel7
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I started reading it yesterday and I'm proud to say that I finally caught up. I love that you didn't make the pregnancy only last two chapters like so many other fanfictions do. That and you keep the characters real. The parents are having problems dealing with the fact that they are having children and everyone is going to accept them. I also like that you didn't try to make every Kingdom Hearts/Final Fantasy character have a role in this story. I'm so sick of seeing Cloud as Sora's father or Roxas as his brother. I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope you have fun writing it!!
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAH! a double heartbeat ;D That's so cute! I feel bad for you Riku...I'm sure you'll get your sex[at least Sora's definition] eventually XD Thanks for updating!
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes i want to be e-mailed about the updates! (geisha_pink2006@yahoo.com) Ch. 18 was great! and i thought there was something special about Dr Aymumi in the end whe she "waved out a wand!?" i think were going to see a little more of her later on. :)
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story. and i do want to sign up for any updates to your stroy or any other yaoi story you had updated. :)
person pokezejello
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man wut crawled up riku's ass and died. Tidus is too cute!! haaaa~ your plot is coming by very nicely i might add!! i cant wait for more! JA!!!
person Sateru99
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, so please keep making more chapters so I can have something to look forward too! ^_^ Its like a fun little soap opera with the Final Fantasy gang with Kingdom Hearts splashed in for color!