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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huh. Well, it wasn't bad....
But the lack of a sexy conclusion made me frown :(.
Stylistically, the story's perfect. Though maybe Adell is a little wordy for his upbringing, this is still written excellently. 5/5, despite my criticisms
But the lack of a sexy conclusion made me frown :(.
Stylistically, the story's perfect. Though maybe Adell is a little wordy for his upbringing, this is still written excellently. 5/5, despite my criticisms
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its a good fic, even though its more lime than lemon. Hope you decided to write a sequel.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Meant hope you "decide" not "decided". One small letter can a very different meaning.
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, they didn't even do it! D= You let Adell go to sleep with blue balls? Shame on you! XD
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic, and so far its avoided any irritating cliches. Definitely worth watching for updates.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD I like this story - it's...cute in a way.
Adell's mother is so evil/funny xDD Woo! Can't wait 'til the next chapter ^_^
Adell's mother is so evil/funny xDD Woo! Can't wait 'til the next chapter ^_^
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. :) I really like where this is going...
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm working on the update. Everything is finished except for one segment that I'm having some trouble with. As soon as I finish tackling it then the rest of the story can be posted. =)