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for To Forgive, Divine

by LoreleiJ

person Plangkye
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finished this, paused, said aloud "Holy shit!" That was the most tasteful and skillful sex scene I've ever read, honestly. Also, I can't even begin to tell you how much I love your portrayal of Atton's transformation into a Jedi.
person RyuaAlba
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome. It managed to be hot, but not dirty, which is a rarity on this site. Don't get me wrong, I adore a really dirty, crude, well written story, but I love how sweet this one was, almost concentrating more on their emotions and desire than the acutal physical aspects. Plus, one of my favourite pairings of all time. Nice job!
person LoreleiJ
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Misha I'm glad you love me :0) Sorry it's taken so long to add my little comment here; I wish I could answer you direct but will have to settle for hoping you read my "review". If you're ever interested in reading the whole story, it's posted on Fanfiction.net under the same author's name, Lorelei Jane. I'm a huge Atton/Exile fan myself and when I saw your challenge I couldn't resist posting the exerpt.

Anyhoo, thanks SO much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked my offering.

Always, LJ
person Misha
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oo=

As promised, I love you.
x3

Aaand if you wanted a request for a fanfiction; I'd be happy to do it.