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"YOU BROKE MY VAGINA, YOU BASTARD!!!"

Totally gonna be thinking that the next time I read about a hymen breaking.

This made me ROFL so much, especially the "tubbing" bit x3

Lol, loved it. This was the first MST I read, and it's still funny. XD

I love these stories where they pick apart someones story more than reading there's (especialy these). Just like the digimon equivelent to what youre doing (forgot the name of they're author). btw. (just incase) this was very funny.

Don't let people say that your MSTs suck. I've read both and couldn't stop laughing! And the bad part was the fact that I was eating Vanilla yogurt and thankfully no slutty top or else I wouldn't have heard the end of it.

Keep up the good work! I must read more!

ToonMissy

I actually liked your little parody.
AHAHAHAHAAAH! incest makes me laugh so damn much..
I swear.. they only get more depraved. I actually was reading one that went something like..
Sister: Oh my! what is that?!
Brother: It's a lolipop, suck on it.. its good!

You forgot to mention the fact that this author basically seems to have turned Aryll catatonic as soon as she and Link began to kiss. Not even a mention (on their part, not yours) of her being in pain from losing her hymen, nor of her at all besides as her cunt...

Also, to the dude who's going around calling yourself Anon, as well as your twin sibling; the whole, "this story sucks/you're sick/etc."+"Stop impersonating me!" act is beginning to get old. I mean, seriously, you've been going on with this for what; two and a half years now? Enough is enough already, people. It stopped being funny six months ago.

quite funny

You were expecting maybe the easter bunny? Anyway, although it was a very technically sound job, it just didn't set me laughing. And why are there MSTs but to laugh at?

...will the REAL Anon please stand up? Also, this story doesn't FAIL... It was alright... It could have been better, but it doesn't SUCK. 3 out of 5! I'm surprised that those reviews weren't REMOVED.....