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for Keep Your Enemys Closer

by Wynwalk

person RikuandMe
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*MEOW*

I can't WAIT for your next chapter of your story PLEASE make it SOON PLEASE

I LOVES IT

till then its...

Everybodys oh so loveable kitty ninja

Paige =^-^=
person Streppy
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH please make chapter 3!!!! I've been waiting so long for an update!! this story is sooo good!!! X3
person MissMurder111
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh Sora doesnt want to take off his shirt. i can so imagine Riku just drooling over him when he took off his shirt and like pretending to run into him to touch some of his skin. LMAO!!!! and by the way u ended ch. 2 u made it sound like he had something to hide. like he was abused or something. i hope he wasnt abused! but it would be sweet if he had like a little tattoo. Anyway its ur story so whatever u write next is cool with me! so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person RSlover
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks
I can't wait to find out what happens in chpt 3 ^-^
I hope things between riku and sora gat heated up soon =D
Awesome story so far
lookin forward to chpt 3
person Ry
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD I so wish P.E. had half the boys taking off their shirts at my school! Awesome. <3
person Wynwalk
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo. Riku didn't just...punch Sora in the face. It's more of a type of prank where you make them hit themselves.
person losthimagain
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm...I would like to see where you go with this. Is there a reason that Riku wants to hurt Sora for? Because to me it's unknown to randomly punch someone in class.
person nikki
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh... tis very good!!! i hope you update soon!
person soraxcloud
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh need more!!!! *shakes computer violently*

T_T

I don't wanna wait too impaciet when it comes to good stories with cliff hangers. D:
person Nasha D.J.
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Please update it very soon, I'm starting to like this fic alot :).