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June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have tumbled over this story and I have to say it is really great. I love the characters Zaba and Lina, their relationship, and how you include both of their thoughts smoothly. It is sad to see that this has not been updated since 2007 though, but it was worth reading anyway.
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December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He's going to save her, right?! I hope you finish this fanfiction soon!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... I love this story! I finally finished reading it and I can't wait to see what happens with Lina and Zaba, and I can't wait to see that bitch undead chick get it right in her hollow eyesocket. Hopefully she does, anyway. But well done on the last chapter especially. There are some pretty dark momemnts in this story, and as hard as they may be to write, they definitely give it even more oomph than it already had. Your characters are totally believable, and I had a chuckle when I read the part where they were getting drunk, it was too good. But anyway, I hope you update soon, this is too good a tale to leave unfinished and I eagerly await the next installment!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It took me awhile to finish this (My computer has been bad! Naughty hunk of parts!) and I've wanted to review dammit! (Especially since you've left me such nice reviews! And yes my trip was lovely, thank you! ^^ I got back a bit later then I expected though!)
Anywho, I babble a lot. But I think this is a fine piece, I'd put it in my top ten Fanfics! You're fabulous darling!
Mwah!
iley
Anywho, I babble a lot. But I think this is a fine piece, I'd put it in my top ten Fanfics! You're fabulous darling!
Mwah!
iley
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh, and write more <3
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is grate pls update soon.
i just got 1 more thing to say. FOR THE HORDE!!
i just got 1 more thing to say. FOR THE HORDE!!
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRRREEEE FOR THE LOVE OF THE HORDE WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that's one hell of an interesting story... bravo!
Can't wait for more!
Can't wait for more!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what? Never mind, you don't you have to answer it, okay?
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry MRB that I didn't get back to you sooner. I've been really busy the last week or so.
As to your question, I was having trouble with the rape scene I didn't know how I was going to do it with out getting too graphic. And I guess I just wasn't as comfortable writing about it as I thought I would be in the beginning. At least writing about a female raping another female anyways.
The next chapter is about a third done so far, and it should be better and longer. Thanks for your reviews everyone, and thank you for reading ^_^
~Azure Bonds~
As to your question, I was having trouble with the rape scene I didn't know how I was going to do it with out getting too graphic. And I guess I just wasn't as comfortable writing about it as I thought I would be in the beginning. At least writing about a female raping another female anyways.
The next chapter is about a third done so far, and it should be better and longer. Thanks for your reviews everyone, and thank you for reading ^_^
~Azure Bonds~