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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. The apostrophes are not showing up on my Firefox, but it also might be aff. Keep up the good work. Also, where can you find the "Sonic Sexual"?
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, definitely a different take around the Sonic Universe, and with Chaos of all beings to boot. Quick to get into the depth of the story from the very start, it sure is a very interesting read. One in which I hope to see updated soon. Little bits here and there are a bit messy (mostly the apostrophes), but otherwise nicely done ^_^
One thing does come to mind though, will Tikal come to make trouble or stay out of it all entirely? Heh heh, I'm a huge Sonic series fan, so you will see me around here writing my own work and questioning a lot of outcomes here and there. Either way you take the story, keep it up!
~Dark Angel Murdoc
One thing does come to mind though, will Tikal come to make trouble or stay out of it all entirely? Heh heh, I'm a huge Sonic series fan, so you will see me around here writing my own work and questioning a lot of outcomes here and there. Either way you take the story, keep it up!
~Dark Angel Murdoc
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo! (I changed 'Not Real, Really' a little bit. Now you can find out why ??? is doing 'it', so go read it again to find out)
Now this... you know, this is pretty good. At first I was just reading it as a favour and then I realised it's quite engrossing. You need to edit the apostrophies to make it easier to read, and in places the paragraphs seem a little blocky, but that's all superficial. So far Amy/Chaos has been preying on the weak and helpless. Wonder if it's so easy when she/it tries for the stronger guys?
Who'd WANT to assimilate Eggman?
Honestly, how's anybody going to stop her/them?
Normally I hate fics with possible SonAmy (unless it's a love triangle with Shadow) but this has so little SonAmy I'm actually enjoying it!
I'm glad you're so far ahead, but don't you dare fall behind! This is cool and I'm glad you prompted me to read it!
Now this... you know, this is pretty good. At first I was just reading it as a favour and then I realised it's quite engrossing. You need to edit the apostrophies to make it easier to read, and in places the paragraphs seem a little blocky, but that's all superficial. So far Amy/Chaos has been preying on the weak and helpless. Wonder if it's so easy when she/it tries for the stronger guys?
Who'd WANT to assimilate Eggman?
Honestly, how's anybody going to stop her/them?
Normally I hate fics with possible SonAmy (unless it's a love triangle with Shadow) but this has so little SonAmy I'm actually enjoying it!
I'm glad you're so far ahead, but don't you dare fall behind! This is cool and I'm glad you prompted me to read it!