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The Chaos Within

By: sonic232
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The Chaos Within

THIS IS BASED UPON THE 5 PAGE STORY IN THE HENTAI SONIC SEXUAL

Edit: THE STORY IS COMPLETE!!!! Expect a sequel sometime in the future. :D I am in understanding that many users are experiencing a problem with the apostriphies. I have fixed this problem to the best of my knowledge, however if it still persists with some of you, I would love to know so that I may continue to polish it up.

My e-mail is sonic232 [at] gmail.com. The [at] instead of @ is to reduce spam. You'll know which hentai I'm basing it on if you've seen it. If you have one, please send me a link to a translation at my e-mail address, or the translation itself if you have it in text form with references as to where each thing is said. Now, on to the good stuff!

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It's a normal, bright sunny day in Station Square as Amy makes her way through an alleyway on her way back to her apartment from shopping that day. There's a decent sized puddle that she merely steps over, thinking nothing of it. Her thoughts go back to when Station Square was flooded by Perfect Chaos as the puddle begins to follow her. Suddenly, Amy realizes that something is crawling up her leg. The puddle has grabbed hold of her. It suddenly explodes, tentacles of water reaching out and grabbing her, causing her to drop her bag of groceries. More pseudo pods erupt from the water, ripping her clothing and underclothing off of her, leaving her completely naked. She cries in pain as the harsh water splashes against her. Suddenly, one of the watery limbs rears up at Amy's trapped form, aiming straight for her pussy. She screams again in pain, as well as pleasure as the water slides past her clit. The water keeps coming, and the tentacles keeping her stationary begin to position her in a different way as a shadowy figure appears from the water. Amy recognized the figure as Chaos 0. She would be staring in amazement if it weren't for the fact she was being raped by water right now. Another pod bursts from the puddle as it penetrates her anus. She screams again in pain and ecstasy, as the water just keeps coming in. The puddle reduces more and more in size as she hears Chaos whisper to her in her mind, "Don't fight it, it will feel good. As more of me enters your body, the more your body becomes my own. Accept me, and we can share it. Your body and my powers...”

Amy doesn't know what to do, say, or even think right now. The only thing she can concentrate on is the strange combination of pain and pleasure she is experiencing right now. As the final remnants of Chaos begin to sink their way into Amy's body, she collapses on the floor, her eyes have a blank look as Chaos talks more.

"I know what you desire, and I can help you get it. Let me into your mind and body, and together, we can get it...”

Amy's fur is dripping wet, she lays there completely naked as the final drops of Chaos enter her vagina. Amy can barely concentrate her thoughts as she feels Chaos inside of her uterus. To a normal passerby, it would seem that she would be far into pregnancy.
As she tries to collect her thoughts, Chaos begins to move farther into Amy's system, her belly reducing in size rapidly, and pushes its way into her mind. She visibly recoils as she is further tormented by sensations of movement under her skin. She no longer looks pregnant, but huddles into a fetal position as the movement underneath her skin continues. She tries to scream, but finds that she is unable to. Chaos, it seems, was taking her body over. Her mind, as well, was becoming under its influence as she finally manages a thought: "You'd help me finally get Sonic? Why are you doing this...?”

Chaos replies within her mind as Amy gets up, staggering, "I feel that he's been unfair to you, of course... I can help you... Let me into your mind and I can give you my power. You will be in control, naturally. It is either that, or the hard way. And the hard way will hurt. And I shall be in control.”

"...Do I have a choice?”

"Of course, Amy, everyone has a CHOICE. But its either share control with me or be manually assimilated.”

Amy begins to cry at this point, but can feel Chaos resist this as the tears flow back into her eyes. Chaos had control over her bodily fluids, it seems.

"I have no choice... Can you promise me that it won't hurt... That I'll stay the same... That you can help bring Sonic to me?”

Chaos doesn't respond, but Amy feels a twinge as the feeling of movement under her skin comes up again as a visible flow goes to her breasts. Amy flinches in pain at the expansion of her skin, but her arms seemed to be under Chaos' control now as they began to rub the succulent breasts. He finally says, using Amy's mouth this time

"You don't have very long to decide, my dear...”

Her eyes go open in shock as she realizes that she must choose NOW or be lost to Chaos.

"Yes, yes... I agree.”

Amy's mouth contorts to a grin as she clutches her stomach, tingling all over. Suddenly, water bursts from her rectum and vagina as it forms makeshift clothing over her. It wasn't transparent, but it wasn't exactly something you'd want to wear in public too often. It seemed more akin to a one piece bathing suit than anything, and was a deep blue. Chaos' voice disappeared from Amy's mind for the time being as she got up and picked up her groceries as she made her way back to her apartment again. A slightly evil grin flows across her face as her tail is seen to turn to water, then solidify again. The Amy we know and love was gone, replaced by a mind-fusion of her and Chaos.


What will happen now that Chaos has successfully entered Amy's body and mind? What does it plan to do with her? How will it help her get her beloved Sonikku? Find out in the next episode. Leave reviews. Please. Or Chaos will come over and MAKE you.

PS: I know that Chaos can't do any of that in the games, but as I kept looking over that part of Sonic Sexual, in between enjoying it for other reasons, the thought came to mind "What if Chaos could take over someone's body like that?” And the idea eventually evolved into this. That's what happens when you can't translate the dirty Japanese comics you stumble upon :-P
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