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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dam! what will happen next? what kind of weirdo are u? well from what u said u won't update unless you get more reviews so heres my review. now update the dam story! and where did u get sonic sexual? i would like to know! tell me! or i will make chaos make YOU!
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Given that I've had the fortune of reading Tojyo's hentai from which this is based, this is a pretty interesting continuation of it.
Felt it was a bit rushed in some parts, but overall, pretty good. Especially the concept of who has 'control' - Amy, or Chaos, with Amy thinking she does, when Chaos is just really pointing her in the right direction.
Anyhow, I'm looking forward to how this will all end up, given that there's really no one else left to assimilate with save Sonic. (or the Chaotix).
Felt it was a bit rushed in some parts, but overall, pretty good. Especially the concept of who has 'control' - Amy, or Chaos, with Amy thinking she does, when Chaos is just really pointing her in the right direction.
Anyhow, I'm looking forward to how this will all end up, given that there's really no one else left to assimilate with save Sonic. (or the Chaotix).
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I'm reviewing this story as a favor so I read this story as a favor as well. I didn't like this story, I'm sorry but it's true, I don't even like sonic the hedgehog, but this guy, funk man was what he called himself (he told me to mention him) was practically begging me to review this story. Well I'm done, hasta la vista baby!
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey how's it going? good? ok then I read your story and I kinda liked it! I don't know what else to say besides I'm only doing this for funk man so you can update it he's the one who really wants to know the rest. I'll leave it at that. have a nice day!
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic work. The subtle changes each chapter to the "consuming" keep it just as intriguing without seeming like repeating a trick over and over, and the buildup to each is well-crafted indeed. I can't wait for more!
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was extremly pointless yet oddly entertaining. I suppose you deserve a treat, Howsa bout a cookie for the little author? Hmm? Does the author wanna cookie? Er herm, sorry, had to do that, anyway, nice job, looking foreward to chapter 8.
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June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! please finish up! Did I mention it's interesting?
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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*reads Amy getting absorbed* Yes! *reads Rouge getting absorbed* Yes!! *Vanilla and Cream* Annoying brat, yes! *hears about Robotnik* Dear God NO.
It is a very good story so far. Can't say I won't be reading the next part without hands over my eyes though...
It is a very good story so far. Can't say I won't be reading the next part without hands over my eyes though...
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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. It's a personal peeve of mine that people put disclaimers like 'I THOUGHT THIS WAS AN INTERESTING IDEA FOR A FIC OK read&review!' at the end of their first chapter, but overall: nicely done.
Oh, and linking to the Sonic Sexual fap-mag shouldn't really be kosher - if I recall rightly, the original artist didn't like his work spreading across the Net like that, and as a result stopped selling his art CDs altogether. Can you not just put something along the lines of 'if you know what I am talking about you should know where to find the comic', or something along those lines? Linking to the original comic shouldn't even be necessary if you're 'basing' your story on it.
Just my two cents :I
Oh, and linking to the Sonic Sexual fap-mag shouldn't really be kosher - if I recall rightly, the original artist didn't like his work spreading across the Net like that, and as a result stopped selling his art CDs altogether. Can you not just put something along the lines of 'if you know what I am talking about you should know where to find the comic', or something along those lines? Linking to the original comic shouldn't even be necessary if you're 'basing' your story on it.
Just my two cents :I