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for The Chaos Within

by sonic232

schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!
person Harley
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This really was a great story...

But what happened to Shadow and Eggman? They didn't split when Amy gave up! Have they vanished forever? Or did you just forget them? Or is there a point?
person anonymous
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you wrote the story, but you need more sex!! Other than that, fine.
person The Dark chao
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel sad. Amy doesn't like eggman enough to give him a body back XD. Annny way It was a strangly apealing story. almost predicactable but still a nice change of pace.

Thumbs up.
person BZLF
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read all the chaptors. I figured Amy would absorb Sonic in the end. Kinda felt something odd when she absorbed Shadow, considering he'd dealt with the black arms already when she absorbs him. And it seems most likely that Metal Sonic is the one at the end, in the dark.
person I stole your shoes
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make the sequel now! I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Some Guy
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, fantastic story thus far!!!! Can't wait for more! BTW, the whole Amy absorbing Shadow thing... I never saw that coming!
person SomeGuy
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is one awesome story. Can't wait for the final chapter!
person Cyborg Commando
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!

I too have read "Sonic Sexual" and this does seem like an appropriate way to continue it. You've done a good job so far, but let's see if you can keep it that way.

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"Will we see the return of Perfect Ch...err...the appearance of Perfect Amy?"

Perfect Amy huh? *Imagines a giant, pink, liquid hedgenake* Sonic's definitely not going to marry her now. There's other characters that you forgot about. Omega, Chaotix and Metal Sonic. Will Amy absorb them? Or will you just leave them out? I can't find anything bad to say about this story so good work! We need more action/adventure fics out there so finish this up! I want to see the grand finale! Toodleoo!
person Fret7345
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope someone follows this up with another review shortly, I want to know where this goes next. I'm enjoying each chapter, and await your next story.