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Nyeh, very interresting story^^. Continue please! *_*

I hope thats only the first part... Its a good start. I'll check back for updates :)

ohh, intersting!!!

Ah we know Jin has an dark side and I think the only person to free him was his mother Jun, or now Asuka...but good story a little bit of Angst but I hope it not full of Angst I've bet Jin is going to be mad at his devil side...so keep up the good work.

I will say that you gave Hwoarang a nice uh..well the way he is is simply lovely cause it is like him. But the whole { } Did you mean quotation marks? Cause well that kind of confused me alittle bit. Sorry ^^;;;; But other then that i think the fic is coming out good. Keep it up =)

Well, I'm not quite sure what to say about this fic. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed what was here, but.. It just felt like there was going to be more, and then there wasn't.. heh. It's a nice description of Hwoarang's little predicament. One thing though? Were you using >> to denote speech, and [] for thoughts? Because that kind of throws it off, y'know? I think that it would probably better to use quotation marks. Just my suggestion. Hope I don't come off as a beotch, or anything. ^_^;