rate_review Reviews

Hey I liked that story and I do hope that you will get the other chapter up real soon.

Wow, I'm impressed...very impressed. Continue the way it is, and it should be one of the best ff evah!

Yeah the nemw was ment to be. I'm having a little bit of trouble but the next chapter should be out in a few weeks

Sorry that was supposed to be name not nemw

Very nice! :D It has such a pleasurable mix of moods. Mysterious when Adlez walks in, to suspenseful, and then a cheery mood near the end. It's great. =)

By the way... The protagonist's name... Is a tad obvious. Hints at something, if ya get my drift. ~_^

Good Story. Please write more. Thank You!

P.S.
Must know what happens. Young Link is my favorite Zelda character.

No, because I don't plan to have the lemon parts told to the kids. But for the record, assuming we are talking about a relative "Dark Age" time period, sex wouldn't really have been hidden fron the children. Even stories that we tell our children today originally had sex, rape, and murder all throughout them. Keeping sex from children is a new thing when compared to the total time we have inhabited the earth. the concept was just being thought of only a few years before the "New World" was discovered. The sixties, seventies, and eighties had absolutly nothing on the middle ages or the reniassance or the time of the roman empire. Just think, in a time where fourteen year olds were married off, how long before that had these kids known about sex? But that was then and this is now and i refuse to write anything that could make even the most deviant of minds relate to child porn. That shit (excuse my language) pisses me of to no ends.

No offence but ummm... i fhe's going to tell a story to children its going to have to be cencored right?

that was great (so far). the flow is good, and the details are good to and the concept is brilliant, though i think that the chapters could be a bit longer but thatis ok with this chapter due to this being the intro.

Keep up with the good work