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for There is no fair anymore

by TkMur

person Lorilei
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, now you have 13 reviews, and you STILL haven't delivered the goods. As for my input, I think it's neat, but I think you need maybe some more intense detail. That is all. And if you ever want to check my stories out...*wink wink, nudge nudge*
person JJ
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, I wanna know what happens next! You now have at least 1 review.

actual review: i love this story so far, there's just one thing id like to know. Why was Kang revealed so early?

i have no problem with it, jw. PEACE.
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the way you spin, the "evil Raiden" stroyline, he really should be the next major foe, i think it has a lot of promise, don't quit.
person PBJ TIME!!!
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VIOLENCE!!!!
AND SCORPION!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man this is a great story please write more.
person Marevas
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going with your fic.
It's got potential.
One question: why is Raiden insane?
it had to be more than him being Mortal and like super-strong.
person the unknown
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's quite good but a little out of character. all the same i await the next chapter
person Yojohneyjimboy
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AM A HUGE FANBOY OF SCORPION HE OWNZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IF YOU KILL HIM NEXT CHAPTER IMMA BE VERY PISSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Dead Meat
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, PLEASE let scorpion win. I just don't want him to lose...make him kick some ass. He is my favorite character and I just don't wanna see him die....well, it wouldn't be much of a loss to him because he has died before and come back but...ya know he just seems to powerful to die. If you have it in your plans for him to die next....then make him go out with a bang!
person bargeman
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If reviews are what it takes to get you to continue, then so be it. I never review fics but there you go, just shows I want this one to continue. Keep up the good work, and more to the point, get on with it! :-)