rate_review Reviews

I love the story so far! this is the best one I 've seen on AFf .Please hurry with a new chapter!

The only thing recognizable are the character's names. It lacked any real development and it was pretty short. Next time if your not sure on characterizations try a little research; its not that hard just search the web. Also, be sure to write a setting and add some small form of plot. Details wouldn't hurt either, the lemon was lacking. Well keep trying, you can only get better.

That was so cute. I'm a great fan of LOD and I do agree we need more fics. Oh hell...I guess we have to live with what is there. You did a good job. No, a fantasic job on it. Write more!! Write more!!

This...isn't very much like Rose. At all. Nor is it particularly interesting. At all. Another classic from you, I see.