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for UB3: Greek Irony

by Breech_Loader

person Takara
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, i forgot to review this chapter. Hope Espio is ok. But it would be kind of akward to read a rape fic with M/M thing. eh..but that's just me. Can't wait for chapter six to come out real soon.
person SonicFrank
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but um.... Some of us liked the fic the way it was... This was a great story before you decided to change it and make it a M/M pairing... Good luck with your writing talent, but when it comes to this particular piece of literature, you've just lost a fan. Sorry...

~S.F.
person The Dark chao
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. just wow. ><;; And here I thought I would NEVER find a story on here I actully liked for the story itself. ><;;
When I first saw the descripttion for UB1 I thought "Oh god another dumb rape fic.." Finnally I checked it out becuse of lack of anything else to read and suddenly I definatly regreted not reading it sooner. *thumbs up* Keep it up! *nods*
person The Dark chao
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about my last comment... it didnt post it all for some reason >>;; Basically I said I didnt want to read it at first 'cuz it has rape in it then I finnally read it and I REALLY enjoyed it. sooo ya keep it up and all!
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read your other works and as always quite the interesting fic. Your'e previous works have shown what can be expected, so I await the next chapter anxiousily.
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Please continue. If it is alright, I would like to make two requests for this fic.

1: Tails is alive and well.

2: Sonic's dick gets torn off and then gets force fed to said hedgehog.
person Takara
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One question: WHY MUST YOU KEEP ME IN SUPENECE!? DO MORE!!, DO MORE!!!

:; clears her throat:; sorry, little hyper today.

Can't wait to see who's lying and who's telling the truth. I always knew Rouge was a slut.

Rouge:: What did you called me!?

Me: nothing :; shifty eyes:;

And when the hell we going to see someone "screwing around"? And where the hell is Shadow at!?

Shadow: i'm right here.

...oh. Sorry, done it again. ^^''
person Silmarion Darkheart
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one. I like Espio. He really is the only person in this world (except Patrick) who seems to have morals. Update soon.




Your faithful fan and reader
~Lord Silmarion Darkheart~
person SonicFrank
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! You didn't fix the name, but at least you acknowledged it! hurry up with chapter four! I can't wait!
person Takara
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intresting, Very intresting... Contune on.