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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Believability? No. Quality writing? Meh. Good sex? Yes.
One of the few 'beatable' stories in the Zelda section (i.e. 'Could you beat off to this?'). Sex scenes were tremendous, and lets face it, that's what matters. Very much 'porn-on-the-page', which is what a lemon fic should strive to be. Some of it was silly (I mean, if Saria's a virgin, and its her first time with Link, is she going to be a wild slut? I doubt it), but on the whole, was good.
One of the few 'beatable' stories in the Zelda section (i.e. 'Could you beat off to this?'). Sex scenes were tremendous, and lets face it, that's what matters. Very much 'porn-on-the-page', which is what a lemon fic should strive to be. Some of it was silly (I mean, if Saria's a virgin, and its her first time with Link, is she going to be a wild slut? I doubt it), but on the whole, was good.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story!!!! can you finish the Kokiri cappers chapter faster? Thanx! ^-^
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite entertaining. Please continue.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I, too, think that there is too much yaoi on this site. I enjoy het fics more... this one was a bit queer, but I enjoyed reading it. I wouldn't mind more details and longer chapters, though. Update soon!
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank God for you!!
There is far too much yaoi on this site. Not that I descriminate or anything, but it is a challenge at current to find some good stuff.
This is excellent work and I can wait till you get to the likes of the Zoras and Gerudos. Heh heh heh.
There is far too much yaoi on this site. Not that I descriminate or anything, but it is a challenge at current to find some good stuff.
This is excellent work and I can wait till you get to the likes of the Zoras and Gerudos. Heh heh heh.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fucking great! Update!!