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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good stories!! Just finish the freaking kokiri chapter!
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* I really hate it when a girl does that. I was really into this chapter until you wrote that part in, I haven't exactly had the best experince with that kind of situation! I'm not going to ilaborate but please change it!!
Anyways, loved the story so far but you cna only have so much sex in a fix, I know it's smut but.... go along WITH the story line too, it'll make it more interesting. Also when Malon was riding with Link he would have liked it more is she sat in front... if ya get whata I mean.
Next I think you should explore the possiblity of Ruto, the Gerudo, and of course... MONSTERS!! But let me explain BEFORE you get grossed out. You see, I think you shouldstart "changing" the monsters a "bit".... make them Succubus and such, also have link save some girls from the.... errr, ravenging monsters! and of course that random girl will "reward" him for saving her. *evil grin* There really aren't to many girls in Hyrule are there? Sucks for players, the world is so small they women could find them anywhere! *evil laughter* And would make for an interesting chapter hwere some random guy begs Link to hep hide him from a band of "evil man hating women" who are in fact all the women he fucked and pised off, of course Link doesn't know this until the end but i't'd be interesting if you could make that a funny chapter.
Oh well, I'm gone, keep up the wonderful work!
Anyways, loved the story so far but you cna only have so much sex in a fix, I know it's smut but.... go along WITH the story line too, it'll make it more interesting. Also when Malon was riding with Link he would have liked it more is she sat in front... if ya get whata I mean.
Next I think you should explore the possiblity of Ruto, the Gerudo, and of course... MONSTERS!! But let me explain BEFORE you get grossed out. You see, I think you shouldstart "changing" the monsters a "bit".... make them Succubus and such, also have link save some girls from the.... errr, ravenging monsters! and of course that random girl will "reward" him for saving her. *evil grin* There really aren't to many girls in Hyrule are there? Sucks for players, the world is so small they women could find them anywhere! *evil laughter* And would make for an interesting chapter hwere some random guy begs Link to hep hide him from a band of "evil man hating women" who are in fact all the women he fucked and pised off, of course Link doesn't know this until the end but i't'd be interesting if you could make that a funny chapter.
Oh well, I'm gone, keep up the wonderful work!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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What the crap!
What the crap!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaay too much Star Wars in that. Lol, I thought I recognized a few phrases before, but that chapter just proved it. Great job on the chapters, keep it up!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah.
My.
Gawd.
<3 T_T
My.
Gawd.
<3 T_T
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is funny and tons of fun and poor Link its funny
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was stupid as shit! Jesus Christ. A Star Wars transplant into OOT? Fuck. I roll my eyes in amusement.
Not as good as previous chapters. Didn't focus enough on the orgasms. Meh.
Not as good as previous chapters. Didn't focus enough on the orgasms. Meh.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool love the empire strikes back scene
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great reright chap4 faster please 1000000000000000000000000 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!-_-
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo keep it up. I can't wait for a chapter with Ruto in it.