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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, that was very interesting! It's kinda weird seeing Anju being the submissive, besides the threesome scene, of course. Seeing her begging to stop was hawt.
And, being Link the one helping to finally push her over the edge was a great idea. Yay for paradoxes! What's the point of being the Hero of time if you can't abuse of it, right?
And, being Link the one helping to finally push her over the edge was a great idea. Yay for paradoxes! What's the point of being the Hero of time if you can't abuse of it, right?
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work! Keep it coming!
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far this has been a very interesting story. I am guessing the pendants will be having a central part in this; of course it seems obvious. I think I can guess what might happen with Saria, though I will not say it here.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D= Ok, this is gonna be a long review, cuz I have been reading this from the beginning, but always put it off. And yesterday I was gonna review (Ruto's chapter), but now you surprise me with a new update!
Man, the story is really, really good! Packed with huge amounts of hardcore sex, and much happy girls >3 The quality of the story was a bit too fast paced in the beginning, but as the story progressed it kept improving, becoming more graphic and just better to read X3 And longer chapters! The Princess and the Peasant chapter was pretty lengthy and enjoyable X3
Oh, and I also love how you're using practically all the girls in da game XD All the Kokiris chapters have been just good stuf X3 never knew Kokiri girls could be so evil and perv >3 And you used Ruto and didn't make her sound like the usual "hideous monster" usually other writers make her look. Virgin, innocent Ruto was another win X3
And most importantly, Link is totally evil >D That's what really caught my attention the first time! Bad Link, raping poor Saria's virgin ass until she fainted... and then he just kept going >3 Immediate win!
Well, I already said I liked Zelda and Malon's chapter. Really well written, and very sweet in a way X3 Hee, I wonder, did Zelda get that intense as a sideeffect of disguising as male for years, or she became that dominant, rough, skilled lover in some other way? Or it was just the sight of Malon dressed to be used, with all and collar, that turned her on that much? When Zelda threatened to tie Malon up, for a moment I thought the red would have an early orgasm and scream "Yes, tie me!" XD The ending was pretty sweet; I thought Malon would try to seduce Zelda, maybe try something evil on her, but her reaction was lovely ^^ and perfect for lots of potential scenarios
Now, to the ideas/suggestion/request thingy part you mentioned.
1.- for some evil reason, I always imagined Malon as a sexual slave (and yay, I was happy when Impa and Anju trained her to be one), but I always pictured Nabooru the one breaking the ranch girl. Is it possible to have some Nab/Malon action in the future? Cuz Malon seemed quite stricken by Zelda, even when she discovered she really was a girl; I imagine them ending up together (well, Malon spending more time being used by Zelda) is a very good outcome too.
2.- Talking about Impa and Anju: Welcome party sound good once Impa is freed from Bongo Bongo X3 with Malon as cake of course XD Impa must be curious to see how much the girl has improved XD Tho, Link probably will be too scared to go back to Impa's dungeon XD
3.- In the case Zelda becomes Malon's official owner, I mean, lover, what would they use when Malon feels she wants cock? D= Use toys, strap-on, maybe fisting? or Zelda uses magic to make a cock made of mana? I have read stories with Zelda becoming a guy with magic, but this one doesn't strike me as the same kind.
4.- More Saria abuse sounds good X3 there be plenty monsters to use, or just the usual random thug X3 Although, she's in lake hylia at the moment, she could hear Link went to the Gerudo valley and follow him there... and then be gang raped by the Gerudos! DX
5.- Gerudo orgy sounds good too X3 Now, if they are gonna abuse of Link like Anju and Malon did or not, I think both are good choices X3
6.- Thinking again about Malon as Nabooru's slave
7.- Navi? There are always stories with Navi using magic to grow up and get cozy with Link. If that happens, I kinda imagine her with a childish body. Not child, but more like teen in her early years?
.... ok, the review already got quite lengthy ^^;;;; Sorry about that. Hope you liked what I wrote, or at least lets you know how much I have liked your story. "waves" Bye X3
Man, the story is really, really good! Packed with huge amounts of hardcore sex, and much happy girls >3 The quality of the story was a bit too fast paced in the beginning, but as the story progressed it kept improving, becoming more graphic and just better to read X3 And longer chapters! The Princess and the Peasant chapter was pretty lengthy and enjoyable X3
Oh, and I also love how you're using practically all the girls in da game XD All the Kokiris chapters have been just good stuf X3 never knew Kokiri girls could be so evil and perv >3 And you used Ruto and didn't make her sound like the usual "hideous monster" usually other writers make her look. Virgin, innocent Ruto was another win X3
And most importantly, Link is totally evil >D That's what really caught my attention the first time! Bad Link, raping poor Saria's virgin ass until she fainted... and then he just kept going >3 Immediate win!
Well, I already said I liked Zelda and Malon's chapter. Really well written, and very sweet in a way X3 Hee, I wonder, did Zelda get that intense as a sideeffect of disguising as male for years, or she became that dominant, rough, skilled lover in some other way? Or it was just the sight of Malon dressed to be used, with all and collar, that turned her on that much? When Zelda threatened to tie Malon up, for a moment I thought the red would have an early orgasm and scream "Yes, tie me!" XD The ending was pretty sweet; I thought Malon would try to seduce Zelda, maybe try something evil on her, but her reaction was lovely ^^ and perfect for lots of potential scenarios
Now, to the ideas/suggestion/request thingy part you mentioned.
1.- for some evil reason, I always imagined Malon as a sexual slave (and yay, I was happy when Impa and Anju trained her to be one), but I always pictured Nabooru the one breaking the ranch girl. Is it possible to have some Nab/Malon action in the future? Cuz Malon seemed quite stricken by Zelda, even when she discovered she really was a girl; I imagine them ending up together (well, Malon spending more time being used by Zelda) is a very good outcome too.
2.- Talking about Impa and Anju: Welcome party sound good once Impa is freed from Bongo Bongo X3 with Malon as cake of course XD Impa must be curious to see how much the girl has improved XD Tho, Link probably will be too scared to go back to Impa's dungeon XD
3.- In the case Zelda becomes Malon's official owner, I mean, lover, what would they use when Malon feels she wants cock? D= Use toys, strap-on, maybe fisting? or Zelda uses magic to make a cock made of mana? I have read stories with Zelda becoming a guy with magic, but this one doesn't strike me as the same kind.
4.- More Saria abuse sounds good X3 there be plenty monsters to use, or just the usual random thug X3 Although, she's in lake hylia at the moment, she could hear Link went to the Gerudo valley and follow him there... and then be gang raped by the Gerudos! DX
5.- Gerudo orgy sounds good too X3 Now, if they are gonna abuse of Link like Anju and Malon did or not, I think both are good choices X3
6.- Thinking again about Malon as Nabooru's slave
7.- Navi? There are always stories with Navi using magic to grow up and get cozy with Link. If that happens, I kinda imagine her with a childish body. Not child, but more like teen in her early years?
.... ok, the review already got quite lengthy ^^;;;; Sorry about that. Hope you liked what I wrote, or at least lets you know how much I have liked your story. "waves" Bye X3
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work, this is a great story.
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but I couldn't stop giggling at the star wars quotes long enough to enjoy it XDD;;
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Update.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, I implore you, create chapters 7 and beyond. This has got to be one of the best fics on the site, and I don't wish to see it left unfinished. Also, I truly do appreciate how for the most part its not some kinda yaoi story *shudders*
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! One thing, though. Wouldn't Saria die if she left the forest? I mean, that was what was said about Link, in OoT, before he found out he was a Hylian...
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Link almost getting ass raped and Star Wars? I LOVE these stories!