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for The Devious One

by Williamsk

schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic! I love your unique ooc take on Xs personality. This is very imaginative. The sex scenes are great too! I can't wait for the last chapter! :D
person Uzu
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd laugh if at the end of this, X actually just goes out with Gate XD. I love this story and have been reading it for a few years. (might there be a chance of a sequellll~? :P)
person I_Like_Pie
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate Yaoi stories!!!!
person oath_keeper
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
?!?!?!??!??! what the fuck!?!
person Aria
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ever going to update...? ;; I love this fic, I really do. I especially love how you portray X. I wanna see what'll happen next!
person Vile Deadboss
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has been the most fantastic and amusing MMX story I have read in a while. Can't wait to see the last chapter and good luck with your college.
Poor X, heh.
Hmm, rated before reviewing, will have to get used to this.
person Ri
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated! yay! Oh wow i loved it till the very end. i can't wait to find out what will happen next. Hey take your time with your studies. I know how it is. I wish you the best of luck!! ^____________^
person strwlf
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fourth Chapter too long? Not really. It's just about the right length for what you had to portray in that particular chapter.

I love this story. It's not just sex, which is what I love about it. The only thing that made me cringe was X's rapping. I'm sorry, but I had to skip that bit. I guess it was funny in a way, but it was so embarrassingly bizarre that I couldn't stand reading it without my own face going flush red.

Apart from that the entire thing's great! Please, do keep writing.
person hj
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sniff. ;^; Misses your old FFnet stuffs too --

Fan..art. -->
http://www.livejournal.com/community/rockman_yaoi/18930.html#cutid1
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. i don't think i've ever seen X's character get so terribly butchered