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for Gone Adventuring

by Bigboi

person Shadow
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is what adultfanfiction.net is all about a heaping load of sex with some extreme comedy followed by a good storyline wraped up into very active characters you should be proud of this work of art and please continue
person Nightmare
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Funny as hell love it! write more he should have challenged Drizzt to a 'contest' in his speacil area! Drizzt is the best fighter in the north but is he lacking in other places? I loved the bit with the silver dragon and the 'blaze of glory' please write more!!!!!!!!
person Sean T. Perry
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was enjoyable. I don't look at a grammar and spellinlesnless it is obivious, so I am unable to offer any pointers there. That means that I am stuck with only one thing to say. Write more. I've also read your other fanfics; three doesn't do you enough justice to what I feel is a good sense of humor. I may have read better, sure, but you do have talent. I guess the reason I'm being so nice about your work is that I want to see the conclusion of this story.

P.S. Just a suggestion, F/F could lead to some funny situations in this piece of work.
person Mitsaso
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Simply fantastic!!!
i laughed my ass off throughout almoll oll of the story!! Keep it up!
And throw some male NPC's as well from now on,the 'interactions' possible could prove even more hilarious!!!
person iwdaz
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing!!!


wirte more and don't stop!!!
person BlueSchmoo
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haaaaaahahahahahaah!!! Too funny! I was never fond of bards, but this really gives me a new perspective on them! 'bout time Jahiera 'loosened up' a bit.