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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kinda funny, though maybe a bit heavy-handed. The part about Sheens having butt-babies was funny ^.^
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You used the phrase "flaccid mangherkin". I think I love you.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait Marie is like 40 or somthing? I actually respected this character why did you have to make her act as a slut????
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marie?! Now that was disturbing, no lip suction thing will hide the fact she's three times sheena's ag, I don't where you got the idea for it but it was certinely shocking (just as shocking that lotte was actually mentioned in a fic considering her rareity) It was ok but some parts felt inadequate like *austrailian kiss, I have no idea how an aussie kiss differs from others let alone the country itself dosen't exist in suikoden) Lepant's last minute apperance was great comedy but Marie just felt out of character big time. But still that pairing was somewhat twisted. Funny but twisted slightly.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You said flames welcome but you didn't say anything about flamers. Oh well. Here I am anyway. Good story: well portrayed characters, not too over the top, and I had to wipe my seat at least three times. I raped Sheena once and I can't say he's the best piece of meat I've ever had, but there's no denying his pretty mouth. Keep up the good work, stranger!