Tales of the Abyss –A Wish to the Starry Sky

Chapter 4 - Carry
on Living

THIS CHAPTER IS
NOT YET FINISHED/FINALISED

“Good afternoon,” Jade gestured calmly to the couple from
his position beside the lift as they stepped out, placing special emphasis on
‘afternoon.’ “I trust you enjoyed your… breakfast. I thought you should know
that the guests in the room next door complained about excessive noise from
your room… I can't think why.”
Jade maintained his poker face as he spoke, but they both knew he was laughing
somewhere under that mask.

Tear blushed and Luke covered his face before saying, “Jade,
shut up!”

“So Luke,” Jade continued, whisking the conversation in a
new direction, “what do you plan to do now?”

“… There’s so much I want to do… but for now, I’m going back
to Yulia city with Tear.” Luke repliedclass=GramE>, his arm wrapped around his lover.

“And after that?”

“Right now, I’m not worried about the future, I just want to
make the most of today.”

To be continued…

Enjoy
the fic so far, enjoy yourself?

So
ends my project to create a decent LukexTear lemon
(for now.) Read & review at your leisure, the more reviews I get the more
inclined I become to write more fics/chapters and
further develop my writing skillz – simple formula
really :)
There are probably a few grammatical errors in this as I was in a rush to
publish – I’ll sort them out later, If you are too scared to review then email
me, or both. Any emails informing me that this game should have been on the class=SpellE>Gamecube will be ignored :)

class=GramE>Anyway. Let me know your favourite parts of the class=SpellE>fic, what you think could be improved, whether the
characters were faithful to the game etc – I like long reviews
:).

If
you’ve got any comments, want me to add more chapters, want to see more class=SpellE>LukexTear action, etc feel free to leave a review and/or
email me if you wish. I do try to respond to all emails but I’m a busy man… style='mso-spacerun:yes'> As I state in all my fics,
the more reviews I get, the more inclined I am to write more stuff.

Side
note, if you liked the character development and romance aspects of Tales of
the Abyss, then go buy Ar Tonelico
– Melody of Elemia, you won’t regret it :)

I
may be willing to add more chapters to this depending on the responses I get –
it’s your call people. I’ll be busy with Persona 3 for a while though :)

Next fic for release:

Ar Tonelico
/ Disgaea / Odin Sphere / another Tales of the Abyss
~ Which one will it be?