Ninja Gaiden Koibito

Eliot Expansion: Achievement Unlocked

Eliot stood in the hall, his heart pounding as he reached for the doorbell. His fingers depressed the button and he heard the soft two-tone chime. There was a sudden commotion from behind the door, and the crash of breaking plates. After a moment, the door opened and he saw her.

“Hitomi.” Eliot felt his breath leave him as he gazed at her.

The brown haired girl stood before him in nothing but a white t-shirt hanging loosely on her shoulders that barely reached past her waist. Sunlight poured in through the apartment’s windows, shining through the thin fabric and silhouetting her lithe body beneath. Her eyes were wide with shock.

“Eliot?” She breathed his name. The next moment she screamed. “ELIOT!”

Hitomi leapt upon him, her arms wrapping around his lean shoulders in a fierce embrace. Eliot returned her desperate hug, pulling her tight against him. Hitomi at last pulled back and tugged him in through the door, swinging it shut behind him.

“Oh, Eliot!” Her eyes brimmed with tears. “I…it’s so good to see…Oh, just make love to me!”

Eliot’s face blossomed in an adoring smile as he took Hitomi in his arms, sweeping her bodily off her feet and striding into her kitchen. Hitomi’s lips roamed over Eliot’s mouth, her warm tongue flirting with his own. Eliot’s foot slid across the tile floor, nearly landing them in a nasty fall were it not for his lightning reflexes. Hitomi broke their kiss and they looked down. The broken pieces of two plates and what had once been an omelet lay splattered on the floor along with assorted slice vegetables. Eliot looked back up at the girl in his arms and opened his mouth to ask about the mess, but Hitomi spoke first.

“Later. The fridge. Take me.” Her eyes sparkled.

Eliot set her down and watched her as she braced her palms against the white door of the refrigerator and leaned forward, presenting the tantalizing curve of her butt to the young man standing behind her, wiggling her cheeks playfully with a girlish giggle. Eliot hiked Hitomi’s white t-shirt up over her hips, revealing her athletic buttocks, his hands running over the smooth flesh before reaching to unfasten the front of his tunic’s trousers.

“Do it, Eliot. Do it, do it, do it.” Hitomi pleaded, her breathing quick and shallow. “I want you.”

“I’ve missed you so much, Hitomi.” Eliot’s eager shaft sprang forth. “I’ve missed you more than I can say.”

“Then don’t say.” Hitomi licked her lips, gazing back at him over her shoulder. “Show me.”

Eliot pressed in, marveling at the feel of his cock being devoured by Hitomi’s nether lips, shuddering as his length was welcomed into her tight, hot tunnel. For a moment he considered taking this slow and gently, but his body demanded satisfaction. Hitomi concurred.

“SCHNELL!” She commanded, and Eliot responded.

Eliot’s hips crashed against Hitomi’s taut butt like a jackhammer, pounding his hard rod into her vessel. His hands snaked up under her shirt to grasp her supple breasts in his hands, squeezing the firm flesh between his fingers.

“Oh, Eliot! That’s so good!” Hitomi moaned her approval, humping back against him with each of his thrusts. “Ahhhh! YES! So strong!”

Eliot’s heart swelled with pride as his love writhed before him, shouting praises to him as he pleasured her. He had never felt so confident, so at peace with himself. As his rigid member plunged in and out of Hitomi, listening to her call out his name in ecstasy, he at last felt…

He felt like a man.

“Mein GOTT!!! Oh, Eliot! Oh, darling! I’m going to come!” Hitomi squeaked, her inner muscles quivering in anticipation around Eliot’s driving shaft.

“Me too, Hitomi! Me too! Nnnngh!” Eliot’s hands squeezed down on Hitomi’s firm breasts as he felt his climax approach. He leaned into her, burying his face in her gorgeous brown hair, breathing in her scent as his hips slammed into her. “Hitomi!!! COME WITH ME!!!”

Eliot’s cock erupted into Hitomi’s inner depths as they convulsed around him, pumping the white, hot liquid as it surged into her again and again. The two lovers wobbled on their feet as their legs went weak before the power of their orgasms. They shook as one, their bodies joined intimately together in the most ancient of couplings. At last they slid down to the floor, panting for breath.


* * *


“So what happened?” Eliot asked as he helped Hitomi wipe the remains of what would have been her breakfast from the tiled floor.

“I was about to have my favorite meal of the day when some idiot rang my doorbell and made me trip.” Hitomi gave him a playful grimace, and then winked. “The food went flying and I tried to grab it.”

“Nice catch.” Eliot winked back, wiping the last of the egg from the tiles.

“Why are you here, Eliot?” Hitomi asked as she cleared away the mops and rags.

“Do we need to do it again?” Eliot grinned at her.

“I’m not complaining.” Hitomi stepped close to him, running her fingers down his cheek. “But what of your quest?”

“I came here to celebrate.” Eliot wrapped his arms around her. “My goal is as good as achieved. All I need to do is track down one last person. He’ll know where Ryu is.”

“Oh, Eliot!” Hitomi jumped in excitement. “That’s wonderful news! How did you find that out?”

“I…uh…” Eliot felt his stomach drop out, but he could not lie to his love. “I found the assassin Christie. She told me.”

“Oh, I see.” Hitomi’s arms tightened around his waist. “So you pumped her for information?”

“I…” Eliot stammered.

“Just tell me one thing.” Hitomi looked him straight in the eye. “Is she good with her hands, or is she good with her hands?”

“Wha…what?’ Eliot blinked, his mind groping for balance.

“Back on the island, she used to do this thing with her fingers that would just….oh my gosh, I can’t even tell you how good it felt!” Hitomi giggled, watching Eliot’s confusion blossom into an embarrassed blush. “I just hope you gave as good as you got.”

“Well I… I didn’t do too bad myself.” Eliot swallowed uncomfortably, both relieved and somewhat angry all at the same time.

“I want to hear the story before you go.” Hitomi kissed him on the cheek. “You can tell me all about while I have a snack.”

Hitomi dropped down in front of Eliot, going to her knees on the tiled floor. She quickly unbound his cock, and stroked it to life as Eliot starred down at her with unabashed wonder. Hitomi’s slender mouth engulfed his hard length as he began his tale of locker room voyeurism and apartment room trysts.

Despite his moans and screams of pleasure, he managed to convey the general gist of the story.

* * *

Spending the afternoon pleasuring one another, Eliot at last bid farewell to his love. Hitomi made him promise to return only once his quest was complete, and not a moment before. With renewed vigor, Eliot had set forth to find Ryu Hayabusa’s whereabouts at long last.

Eliot crept through a darkened forest, his feet carefully avoiding the dry leaves littering the ground. According to Christie’s information, his quarry would be found at midnight at the next hill. Eliot could almost hear his own heart hammering away in his chest. Soon he would know where to find Ryu, and soon he would be able to return to Hitomi.

There was the faintest of sounds from just ahead, and Eliot quickly ducked behind a tree. He calmed his breathing, and focused his mind. He could discern two voices conversing in hushed tones. Eliot chanced a glance around the side of the tree and, not seeing anyone, slipped stealthily toward the voices.

Eliot finally caught sight of two figures standing together in the darkness. The shorter of the two was definitely female, but a violet hood obscured her face from Eliot’s view. The taller was obviously male, and wore a dark ninja bodysuit, the lower half of his face covered with a mask. Eliot crouched behind a log and listened closely.

“…wants you to be there. You’re her brother!” The girl pleaded.

“No.” The man shook his head, his brown hair waving slightly in the gentle night breeze. “No, I cannot.”

“Why?” The girl whispered.

“I simply cannot.” His shoulders seemed to sag minutely. “Please. Leave it at that.”

“If you change your mind, you know where to find us.” The girl turned away, and Eliot watched as she leapt up into a nearby tree. She looked back down at the man for another moment, and then disappeared.

Eliot leapt from behind his cover, his mouth already opening to hail the man. He stopped short. The man was gone; vanished into thin air. Eliot looked around, panic filling his heart.

There was a whisper of movement, and suddenly Eliot felt the edge of a blade pressed lightly across his throat. He froze immediately.

“This will have been the last time you attempt to ambush a ninja.” A dignified and righteous sounding voice intoned behind him.

“Wait…Hayate?” Eliot gasped.

“How do you know my name?” The blade remained against Eliot’s throat.

“Christie…told me…I have a message from her, and a request of my own.” Eliot sighed in relief as the blade disappeared. He turned to face Hayate, staring up at the imposing ninja.

“What does the assassin want with me?” Hayate demanded.

“She wishes to meet with you.” Eliot rubbed his throat absently. “She said to tell you that ‘the bride has a groom.’ I do not know what it means.”

“I do.” Hayate’s brow furrowed. “It was brave of you to seek me out, young man. What was your request?”

“Ryu Hayabusa.” Eliot took a step forward. “I must find him!”

“Indeed.” Hayate nodded. “Why is that?”

“My master, Gen Fu, wishes it. It is a quest of utmost importance.” Eliot squared his shoulders.

“Go back to your master, apprentice.” Hayate turned and started moving away.

Eliot stared after him, his mind blank with an abstract horror. Soon the desperation replaced his terror, and he rushed after the departing ninja.

“That’s it?” Eliot demanded, be careful even in his anger not to bar Hayate’s path. “You think you can just send me home? I have to find Hayabusa! I gave you Christie’s message! You have to help me! Please! I beg of you!”

“What is your name, young one?” Hayate starred straight ahead.

“Eliot.” The boy ground his teeth.

“Go home, Eliot.” And with that, Hayate vanished into the night.

“You self-righteous bastard!” Eliot screamed after him.

Eliot’s knees gave out and he fell to the forest floor, his eyes filling with tears. All his hopes had been dashed in a matter of moments. He tried desperately to think of something else, anything else he could do to find Hayabusa.

“What can I do?!?” Eliot cried out into the night. A sickening silence was his answer.

After a long while, Eliot got to his feet. He felt defeat wash through his soul, but he stood his ground. He might be defeated, but he was still a man.

He would face defeat as such.

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Writer Commentary:

Anyone who owns an Xbox 360 will know the thrill and pride from seeing an “Achievement Unlocked” symbol appear during a game. Considering that the Eliot Expansion Pack comes full circle in this chapter, the title seemed appropriate.

Most of the time, each chapter is designed to lead up to a sex scene, but sometimes a more plot-focused chapter is needed. I don’t know about you, but when I read a story on AFF.NET, I’m looking for erotic fiction that gets to the point. When I see “no sex this chapter” in a chapter’s summary, I usually skip it. Shallow, I know, but true for me. So when I realized that this chapter didn’t have a new and marvelous sex scene in it, I decided to fit one in at the beginning.

Really, this chapter is all about Eliot meeting Hayate, and since there won’t be any yaoi in Koibito, the Hitomi scene was included. Her breakfast fiasco that occurs “off screen” is scene in her DOA4 ending cinematic. I’ve really been using a lot of those recently, haven’t I? Eliot and Hitomi have some kitchen sex, after which Eliot explains his goal of finding Hayate, though not by name just yet. It’s somewhat humorous that Eliot expects Hitomi to be angry with him after realizing that he had sex with Christie, even though she had been involved in the massive orgies with the other DOA women.

Eliot manages to find Hayate who is in an argument with Ayane over him not visiting Kasumi now that she is pregnant. Eliot is then ambushed by an awesome Hayate who, after hearing of Eliot’s quest to find Ryu, tells the young boy to go back to his master’s dojo. Eliot takes this as rejection and failure, but of course we know that Hayate really did just tell him where Ryu is! Eliot controls himself, and his newfound maturity is shown as he returns bravely to his master and not running away in cowardice.

And so ends the Eliot Expansion Pack. I really enjoyed the diversion from Ryu, and it was fun to write with a different main character while revisiting our beloved DOA girls. Now with this bridging portion complete, a new saga now begins…

I hope that sounded epic enough.