Ninja Gaiden Koibito

Elliot Expansion Pack: Nikki, Kokoro, Leifang, Hitomi


“Ryu?” Eliot gasped as Kokoro dismounted his softening organ. “He’s returned?”

“No, Eliot, I’m sorry, it isn’t Ryu.” Leifang shook her head sympathetically. “Our host will be here in a few minutes.”

“Host?” Eliot blinked as Hitomi tossed him his robe which he quickly fasted around his lean frame.

“Well, none of the girls owns the island, silly.” Hitomi giggled, punching Eliot playfully in the arm.

“It would be wise not to let him know Eliot is here.” Kokoro cautioned. “I’m not sure how he would appreciate an unwelcome guest. Cute as you might be, Eliot.”

“But what about Ryu?” Eliot asked, ignoring Kokoro’s compliment. “He must have been here for…”

“No time to explain.” Leifang interrupted, looking anxiously over her shoulder. “Quickly, Eliot, hide in the shrubbery outside.”

“You want me to hide in the bushes out front?” Eliot asked, exasperated.

“Better hurry.” Kokoro urged him.

“Very well.” Eliot sighed, quickly scampering out the door. He made his way gingerly into the sculpted shrubs to his right, cursing under his breath as the roots dug into his bare feet. He peeked through the branches of his cover, and got his bearings. He had a decent view of the pool and the sunbathing chairs next to it. After a few moments, Hitomi, Kokoro and Leifang came into sight, donning skimpy bikinis. They were quickly sprawled out on the deck chairs, basking in the sun like they were there all day.

“Hello, LADIES!” A wildly enthusiastic voice boomed. The three girls sat up casually, and waved to someone approaching from behind another hut. A man appeared, tall, dark and muscular, sporting a pair of bright green swimming trunks and a pair of stylish shades. His head was bald save for a short, thin Mohawk. He was followed by a quite striking woman wearing a matching green bikini. She had a rich complexion, contrasting beautifully with her silver hair.

“Gutten tag, Zack!” Hitomi chirped. “Oh, Nikki, you look great!”

Nikki waved back, smiling a little awkwardly. Zack walked up to the girls, smiling broadly as they stood and gathered around him. Eliot could not see Zack’s eyes due to his shades, of course, but he knew all the same that Zack was drinking in the sight of the three Asian knockouts standing in front of him, practically naked.

“So, where are the rest of the lovely ladies?” Zack grinned gleefully, looking around.

“Oh, they’re gone.” Kokoro said casually.

“What?” Zack seemed to deflate, his shoulders slumping and his jaw dropping.

“Christie took off a few weeks ago.” Hitomi started tallying with her fingers. “Kasumi and Ayane left a few days later. Helena had a helicopter come pick her up…”

“Oh, and Tina and Lisa had to leave for their wrestling tour.” Kokoro chimed in cheerfully.

“Just us three left.” Leifang nodded.

“They’re…gone?” Zack whimpered.

“What’s the matter, Zack?” Hitomi asked with mock innocence.

“Why did that…that stupid tax audit have to happen right when you were all here?” Zack clenched his fists, then muttered inaudibly under his breath, something about fairness and the tyranny of lawyers. After a moment, he collected himself and suddenly seemed to cheer back up. “Well anyway, tell me all about what you girls have been up to!”

“Oh, you know.” Kokoro sighed easily. “Volleyball, sunbathing, that sort of thing.”

“Uh…” Zack cleared his throat. “Anything…uh…anything else?”

“Oh! Oh, yeah!” Hitomi piped up. “We played some water sports in the pool! That was fun!”

“I took several very soothing walks on the beach.” Leifang nodded serenely.

“And?” Zack looked stricken.

“And…what?” Hitomi blinked at him, the picture of a naïve school girl.

“You mean you didn’t…” Zack trailed off, hesitating. “You know…you girls didn’t…?”

“I’m afraid I do not understand.” Leifang shook her head. “What else would nine of the fittest females in the fighting world do together wearing bikinis in a private paradise?”

Zack stood there silently, slack jawed. Nikki punched him in the arm, glaring at him with murder in her dark eyes. Zack straightened up and shrugged casually.

“Oh, nothing, nothing. Just wanted to know that you were all safe and sound, that’s all.” Zack nodded emphatically. “Say, would you lovely ladies be so kind as to give Nikki and I a few minutes alone?”

“Oh…well…” Hitomi glanced furtively toward Eliot’s hiding place. “I…sure, of course. We can start packing our things.”

“It was nice seeing you again, Nikki.” Kokoro bowed to her politely. Nikki’s return smile was strained, but not insincere. Leifang bowed as well and the three girls took their leave, Hitomi glancing back once more toward Eliot’s shrub and giving a helpless shrug when Zack’s back was turned. They disappeared behind a hut.

“Zack, honestly!” Nikki punched him in the arm and hard. “Why not just come out and ask ‘hey, sweet cheeks, so did you all have a massive orgy while I was gone?’ You want to make me look like an idiot?”

“No, sweet- uh, honey bun!” Zack shook his head earnestly. “Of course not! I just wanted everyone to have a great time here on my island. Especially after what happened to the last one…”

“Well, I know I haven’t had a great time…yet.” Nikki’s mood seemed to change, and she stepped closer to Zack’s ripped body.

“Oh?” Zack swallowed, speaking in a deeper, more resonant voice. “Is there…anything you need?”

“I think it might be waiting for us in our cabin.” Nikki giggled, tracing a finger down Zack’s remarkably defined abs.

“Nothing that you can’t have right here.” Zack gestured toward the pool chairs.

“You serious?” Nikki almost laughed. “What if they see us?”

“I don’t care who sees.” Zack wrapped his strong arms around Nikki’s shoulders. “You’re my girl.”

“Then let’s do this.” Nikki giggled, slipping out of Zack’s embrace and moving to one of the long tanning chairs, lying back on the warm cushions. “Presentation counts, Zack.”

Zack held up his hands as though signaling a rowdy audience to calm down. Before Eliot knew what was happening, Zack’s trunks were spinning through the air, landing a few feet in front of Eliot’s shrub. Eliot felt a pang of self-conscious envy as Zack turned around slowly, his impressive manhood swinging about freely. Nikki hooted and whistled, clapping with delight.

“Come on over here, big boy!” Nikki called as she sat up, unfastening her bikini top. Her large breasts, freed from their constraints, were a sight to behold.

Zack swaggered toward her, his long cock beginning to swell as Nikki groped her breasts, her fingers toying with her nipples. Zack bent down and pulled the bottom of her bikini down her long, smooth legs. Now wearing nothing but his shades, Zack knelt between Nikki’s spread legs, his head moving to her inviting crevice. Eliot could not see exactly what Zack was doing, but Nikki’s loud moans gave him a good idea.

“Oh yeah, baby! Just like that, oooh…yes…mmmm…right…there…” Nikki’s head lolled from side to side, her hands roaming over Zack’s smooth scalp.

Zack’s strong hands slid up Nikki’s flat stomach to her full breasts, grasping the soft orbs of flesh and kneading them between his fingers. Nikki wrapped her toned legs around behind Zack’s neck, pulling his obviously skilled mouth tighter against her intimate folds.

“Zack, honey…yeah…nnngh! Come on, I want it!” Nikki arched her back, basking in Zack’s ministrations.

Zack’s smiling face emerged from Nikki’s nether lips. He crawled over her, his rock hard erection sliding up her thigh. Nikki took his thick shaft in her hand and guided it slowly, inch by inch, into her moist vessel.

“Oh, baby, you are so…TIGHT!” Zack howled. “Yeah! Hold on, girl!”

“Do it, Zack.” Nikki purred. “Show me who my man is.”

Zack’s muscular buttocks flexed and his hips surged forward, pounding Nikki’s gorgeous body with the power of a raging bull. His testicles slapped loudly against her taut butt, though barely audible over her cries of pleasure.

“Uh-huh! Yes! GOD! Yeah!” Nikki’s legs curled up around the small of Zack’s back, just above his wildly thrusting butt.

“Talk to me, baby! AHHH!!! Wooo!!! Talk to me!” Zack’s lips ravished Nikki’s breasts, his tongue playing with her erect nipples. “What’s my name?”

“Zack! Zack! YES!!!” Nikki squealed, her head lashing back and forth in ecstasy.

Eliot suddenly realized his hand had dropped down into his robe and had begun stroking his very aroused member. Shame washed over him for a moment, but then he looked back up as Nikki shouted.

“Give it to me, baby! YES!!! Pound me with your big, thick cock!” Nikki screamed at the top of her lungs.

“Oh, hang it all!” Eliot muttered and surrendered to his voyeurism, jerking madly in time with Zack’s manic thrusts between Nikki’s wondrous legs. Zack’s hips were now almost a blur, driving his rod violently into Nikki’s warm canal. Eliot’s hand gladly tried to keep pace.

“I’m gonna come, Nikki! I’m gonna come!” Zack’s voice growled passionately.

“Me too, baby, me too!” Nikki’s body, drenched with sweat, shook with every stroke of Zack’s powerful hips. “Ahhh! Bring it to me, Zack! Let’s have it!”

Zack’s engorged organ came out of Nikki’s tight slit with a wet pop. Moving forward, Zack straddled Nikki’s torso, resting his knees under her arms on either side of her chest. He placed his long, dark shaft between the great mounds of Nikki’s breasts, and his lover grasped them in her hands, mashing them together around the raging cock. Nikki leaned up on her elbows, her lush lips opened, and she took the beast into her mouth. Zack’s hips began pumping, sliding his member between the warm flesh of Nikki’s breasts into the moist cavern of her mouth, and the hungry tongue that awaited within.

Zack arched his back, hollering as Nikki massaged and sucked his manhood with fervent zeal. Zack reached out with his right hand and grasped the back of her head, pulling her wonderful mouth into each of his thrusts, while his left hand reached behind him, slipping down into the wet folds between her legs, his thumb caressing the nub of her clit.

“Yeah, Nikki! Take it! Oh, damn! God, you are good!” Zack roared, reveling in Nikki’s expert skill. “You coming?”

Nikki moaned around his shaft, which Eliot took for an affirmative. The young boy felt his own climax building rapidly under the urgent coaxing of his fist. He saw Nikki’s eyes go wide as her orgasm exploded within her. She screamed her release into Zack’s throbbing cock, pushing him over the edge.

“Oh! Oh, baby, here it comes! AHHHHH!!!” Zack gripped Nikki’s head in both hands and went all out, pounding his bulging rod into her hungry mouth. Zack’s buttocks flexed and his testicles clenched, his cock erupted, unleashing a deluge of his seed. Nikki moaned her delight and Eliot, his own orgasm firing his seed onto the shrub, watched as her throat convulsed, drinking in every last bit of Zack’s seed.

Eliot staggered on his feet, his legs threatening to give out. By all that was good, he had never experienced such ecstasy by his own hand before. Eliot fastened his robe once more and watched as Zack and Nikki cuddled for several minutes, their hands sliding leisurely over their naked, sweat drenched bodies.

“I’ll be in the shower.” Nikki kissed Zack full on the lips. “Please feel free to disturb me.”

“This is one vacation you’ll never forget.” Zach kissed her hand as she stood and walked away, her breasts swaying freely as she disappeared from Eliot’s view. Zach watched her go, shaking his head in awe. “Hey kid, can you toss me my trunks?”

It took a moment before Eliot registered the sentence. He held absolutely still.

“Oh, come on, help a man out.” Zack turned and looked straight at his hiding place.

Eliot made double sure that his robe was secure, then stepped out from the shrub into view. He bent down and picked up Zack’s green trunks and walked stiffly toward him.

“Hey, thanks, kid.” Zack nodded taking the trunks from Eliot’s extended hand. His shades glinted in the sunlight. Eliot could see his terrified face reflected in their darkened lenses. “I didn’t mean to scare you, but I think Nikki would have been freaked out if she knew you were there the whole time.”

“How…how did you…?” Eliot stammered.

“That mess of blond hair on your head doesn’t blend in real well with those green bushes.” Zack grinned.

“I’m sorry, sir.” Eliot murmured, unsure what else to say.

“For what?” Zack pulled on his trunks. “You do something wrong?”

“Well…” Eliot thought about it. “This is your island, and I don’t have permission to be here.”

“That’s true.” Zack nodded wisely. “But I’m gonna guess that you and Hitomi are an item. Am I right?”

“Yes,” Eliot was completely at a loss. “How did you know?”

“I read people pretty well, kid.” Zack shrugged. “Poker player. But that doesn’t matter. You’re here, she’s here; that makes her happy. I wanted all the girls here to be happy. I don’t see a problem.”

“Yes, sir.” Eliot nodded slowly. “But you and Nikki just…right there.”

“I offer a little free entertainment to my guests, and they just don’t appreciate it.” Zack shook his head and sighed.

“Oh, no, I…uh…I did.” Eliot felt terribly uncomfortable. “Um…thank you for the…uh…show….sir.”

“And stop calling me ‘sir.’ Makes me feel old.” Zack motioned for Eliot to sit next to him, so he did. The young boy tried not to think about the fact that, just a few minutes before, Nikki had been writhing in all her naked beauty on the same pool chair.

“So what brings you here…oh, hey, I don’t know your name yet.” Zack chuckled.

“Eliot, si--, Zack.” Eliot shook Zack’s proffered hand. “I’m on a quest to find Ryu Hayabusa, the great super ninja. This was the last place I knew he had been.”

“Ryu was here?” Zack’s face brightened up. “Do you know…uh…anything about what he did here?”

“Well, Hitomi…” Eliot winced a little as he recalled Hitomi’s detailed account of Ryu’s exploits on the island; including Hitomi. It was strange, but Eliot held no ill will against Ryu for the pleasures he had given his newfound love. That was before they had even met. Anyone who had given Hitomi such delight was not someone for him to despise, but it still made him uncomfortable to picture Ryu Hayabusa having wild sex with his dearest love. How could he ever hope to compare to the unmatched sexual skill of a super ninja? He pushed the thought from his mind and focused. “She told me about it in pretty graphic detail.”

“I’ll tell you what,” Zack’s shades seemed to gleam with anticipation. “You tell me everything you know about what happened here, and I think I can help you out on your quest.”

“I…All right. But the tale really starts back a while, after his village was attacked.” Eliot nodded, searching his memory. “He and Ayane, they were like brother and sister, but they made love like they were of one mind…”


* * *


“DAMN!!!” Zack whistled in awe after Eliot had finished his tale. “If half that stuff is even a quarter true, then you have got to find him! Pick his brain and take notes, then bring them back to me!”

“I promise.” Eliot nodded. “But how do I find him?”

“Ok, listen up.” Zack leaned in close, his voice becoming a conciliatory whisper. “There’s this casino I like to visit back on the mainland. There’s a guy there goes by the name Charlie the Cheat. Yeah, yeah I know.” Zack nodded at Eliot’s skeptical grimace. “But he’s a terrible poker player. He knows people who can find people. He’s a sleazy guy, but he knows his stuff. Keep your eyes open, and you’ll be okay.”

“Charlie the Cheat. Got it.” Eliot grinned, excitement growing in his gut. His quest no longer seemed quite so daunting.

“I’ll have my chopper fly you back to the mainland tomorrow morning.” Zack patted him on the back. “Until then, go give Hitomi something to hold her over until you see her again.”

“Yeah…thanks.” Eliot blushed. “But isn’t Nikki waiting for you in the shower?”

“Holy crap!” Zack jumped up and ran toward his cabin. He called back over his shoulder as he sprinted away. “Don’t forget! Tomorrow morning!”

“I’ll be ready!” Eliot laughed. “Tomorrow.”

* * *


“Eliot!” Hitomi ran to him as he entered the cabin, throwing her arms around him. “Did Zack see you? Is he angry?”

“It’s fine.” Eliot nodded and explained Zack’s offered assistance.

“That’s wonderful.” Kokoro smiled.

“But what will you do till tomorrow morning?” Leifang asked with a faint sparkle in her dark eyes.

“Us.” Hitomi answered for him, pealing off her bikini even as she spoke. Kokoro and Leifang followed suit, and Eliot threw his robe to the floor as well.

“How do we, um…” Eliot felt confusion, but the familiar shame was nowhere to be found. “How do we do this?”

“Just lie down on the bed and try to stay conscious.” Hitomi giggled madly.

Kokoro pushed Eliot down onto the soft pillow covered bed. The three girls crawled lithely toward his spread legs, Leifang to the left, Hitomi in the middle, and Kokoro to his right. Three of the cutest faces he had ever seen came cheek to cheek to cheek over his rock hard shaft standing boldly at attention. Their lips came down on him, and Eliot’s scream could not do justice to the sensations coursing through his loins.

Hitomi took his cock deep into her mouth, her teeth grazing the sensitive organ. Leifang and Kokoro each covered a testicle with their warm, soothing lips, lapping at the tender spheres with their masterful tongues. Eliot’s arms flailed about, his hands tearing and clawing at the pillows around him, his mind near the border of insanity. He could form no words to express what he was experiencing. He merely grunted and screamed his passion at the top of his lungs.

“Nnnghhaaa!!! AHHHHH!!!” Eliot’s hips bucked as his loins went nova. He felt Leifang and Kokoro’s mouths fasten down on his clenching testicles, urging forth the seed that surged up into Hitomi’s relentlessly sucking mouth. It felt as though gallons of the white, ropey fluid were gushing from him. Hitomi downed every last drop, her tongue dancing along the length of his rod, not allowing it to soften.

“Leifang.” Hitomi moved to the side and then Leifang’s glistening slit was descending upon Eliot’s cock, enveloping the hard member in a warm, moist world of pleasure.

“Oh, Leifang, you feel amazing!” Eliot shuddered. He sat up, taking Leifang’s creamy breasts in his mouth, suckling her nipples.

Hitomi and Kokoro moved in closer to either side of them. Leifang’s hands roamed down the girls’ bodies and slipped into their nether lips, eliciting pleasured moans from the German and Japanese vixens. Eliot, his mouth still ravishing Leifang’s soft mounds, sent his hands out to the girls at his sides, grasping a breast in each hand and kneading their firm, warm orbs. Kokoro and Hitomi both leaned in, their lips meeting Leifang’s over Eliot’s blond head in a feverish kiss, three tongues wrestled for dominance.

Eliot sat on the bed, his left hand fondling Hitomi’s right breast, his right hand groping Kokoro’s left bosom, and his mouth ravaging Leifang’s mounds as she rode his pulsating cock, all the while the three girls engaged in a passionate kiss above his head. Eliot would never question the existence of God again.

Leifang was in control, and her masterful skill brought them all to a miraculous union of climax. Her fingers sent Hitomi and Kokoro screaming to the heavens, and her unyielding hips threw Eliot into a toe curling orgasm that nearly cost him his voice.

“Leifang! Nnnhhaaa!!!” Kokoro convulsed madly.

“Mein GOTT!!! GOTT!!!” Hitomi shook as one possessed.

“Oh ELIOT!!! Come with us!” Leifang’s tunnel clamped down on him.

“KOKORO!!! LEIFANG!!! HITOMI!!!” Eliot roared each of their names as three titanic spasms racked his body, every muscle clenching as his loins exploded into a firestorm of ecstasy.

Twice more they repeated this transcendental sexual union, each girl taking a turn on Eliot’s sturdy cock, each time flirting with madness as they came together, their bodies straining to cope with the pleasures they shared. At last, Kokoro and Leifang fell asleep in one another’s arms.

Eliot and Hitomi kept at it, basking in the pleasures that youthful energy alone can sustain. The hour before dawn found Eliot atop Hitomi, thrusting deeply within his love, their eyes locked in wordless conversation, professing their love for one another at the most fundamental level.

“Aghhh!!! Unnghhh!!! Hitomi!” Eliot gasped as yet another orgasm grew within his pounding groin. “I want to be with you…ohhh!!!...I want you…Forever!!!”

“Oh, Eliot!” Hitomi’s eyes filled with tears even as her legs wrapped around his butt, pulling him into her with a vengeance. “Me too!!! AHHH!!! Me too!!!”

“I’ll come back…Oh, YES!!!” Eliot knew he only had a few moments before words would abandon them again. “I will come back for you!!!”

“Yes, Eliot!!!” Tears streamed down Hitomi’s smiling face. “And come for me…NOW!!!”

Eliot came, and Hitomi came. They came together, their bodies joining together as one flesh in a fusion of unfathomable ecstasy. No seed was left in his loins, but Eliot needed no more arcane marks of possession, their wordless screams of passion sealed their union. She was his, and he was hers.

Always.


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Writer Commentary:


This was one of only a couple chapters to pick up exactly where the last chapter ended. I enjoyed the fact that one of the first things to occur in this chapter is Kokoro dismounting Eliot.

Bringing in Zack as a guest star was an idea born from my recent readings of DOA douijin. A whole bunch of those are total garbage if you ask me. Having the DOA ladies being gang-raped by a horde of mask-wearing thugs isn’t what I call arousing. It’s more than a bit disgusting if you ask me. A few, though, are really good. Several are based on Zack’s island, with our favorite entrepreneur getting into some interesting fixes, usually leading to him bedding a swath of the DOA girls in the process. I couldn’t pass up writing about someone who is so stylistically different than Ryu or Eliot.

Zack isn’t a ninja. He’s just a pretty normal guy, and speaks without the formal etiquette of stereotypical ninja dialogue. I wanted him to embody the reader’s point of view. Zack’s awkward line of questioning pretty much mirrors the fantasies of a lot of gamers who played Dead or Alive Xtreme Beach Volleyball. Leifang’s faux-innocent question is kind of hilarious to me. What would a bunch of super-sexy bikini-clad girls do together all alone on a deserted island? Play volleyball? Right….sure…

The character Nikki was really a life-saver when bringing Zack into the fold. She freed me from having to figure out which of the established DOA girls Zack would be with. None of them made much sense given their relationships with Ryu and Eliot. With Nikki, Zack could have a passionate love scene that endeared him to the reader without compromising any of the other characters.

The sex scene was more fun to write than I had anticipated. Zack’s character allows for a more vernacular approach to the sex-talk. This is the first occurrence of male on female fellatio in Ninja Gaiden Koibito, and also the first overtly voyeuristic sex scene. Eliot takes the role typically reserved for the reader, watching and…enjoying the spectacle. Basing the viewpoint around Eliot allowed for a less jarring change of perspective. Zack and Nikki are newcomers to the story, after all, but we can still get a thrill from their antics.

Eliot and Zack’s conversation are pretty vital. Eliot is given a new goal, and has to leave the island. It also touches on the issue of Ryu’s past encounters with Hitomi. Eliot and Hitomi are in love, and knowing that Ryu Hayabusa, The Ninja Sex Machine (trademark pending) has pleasured her, Eliot has some doubts about himself. And to be honest, who can blame him? Ryu casts a big shadow, after all.

This was a very satisfying chapter for many reasons, and the foursome is a big reason for that. I still think that the original Hitomi/Leifang and Kasumi/Ayane chapters are my favorite multi-partner scenes, but this one turned out much better than I had hoped. I really had my doubts about being able to make a foursome read well without getting bogged down trying to describe the positions of three girls at once. A symmetric position worked out well: one girl riding Eliot, and two on either side. Leifang and Eliot have sex for the first time, while Leifang orchestrates Hitomi and Kokoro.

Hitomi, Leifang, and Kokoro all seemed to represent youthful female beauty. Their characters just seem ‘younger’ than the other women to me. I know the official ages might disagree, but these three girls just seem ‘younger’ than Kasumi, Ayane, or at least less ‘mature.’ Therefore, this foursome scene becomes an orgy of youth and the sense of boundless freedom it embodies.

Of course, Hitomi and Eliot just keep going at it long after Leifang and Kokoro call it a night. They’re in love, after all!