Engulf
folder
+S through Z › Tales of the Abyss
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
2,517
Reviews:
5
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Category:
+S through Z › Tales of the Abyss
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
2,517
Reviews:
5
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Tales of the Abyss, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Review Replies {not story}
I know I'm probably not supposed to do A/N in entire new chapters, but because there is no review reply option, this is what I have to do in order to refrain from PMing each and every one of them.
Tear getting drunk did seem like a cheat-out way to get her to sleep with Jade, but this is AU, which also justifys Tear being seventeen. Yeah, I knew she was sixteen in the game. Tear wasn't a pick-up ho, but the way her life must've been, AU or not, with Van and the rest of her family dead, seems like a pretty damn good reason for her to get drunk. She's lonely and doesn't have anybody.
Doing Jade in first person is a tough issue and really hard to do. He's not the kind of person though who, if he ever wrote a lemon (lol), would go on and on about the ecstasy of it all. He's telling this story in a narrative way about how he was seduced one night by a young girl he'd never met. That's pretty risqué if you ask me.
I am a yaoi fan, but I know fangirls can be annoying. I'm nothing like that. At all. :)
The scenario was out there, but it could happen in an alternate universe. Tear was alone and Jade was there, bored, so something happened. Trust me, I've read stories that have FAR WORSE scenarios than mine. The ones I've read are "Hi my name is blah let's have sex okay done". That's pathetic. At least Jade had thought process and hesitations.
Thank you all for your reviews and I appreciate every bit of feedback. I don't know if I can write another with these two, seeing how difficult it is to grasp the concept, but maybe something else. I enjoyed hearing back from you all, and hopefully after you 5 have read this, I can take it off so more people can read the story clearly.
Tear getting drunk did seem like a cheat-out way to get her to sleep with Jade, but this is AU, which also justifys Tear being seventeen. Yeah, I knew she was sixteen in the game. Tear wasn't a pick-up ho, but the way her life must've been, AU or not, with Van and the rest of her family dead, seems like a pretty damn good reason for her to get drunk. She's lonely and doesn't have anybody.
Doing Jade in first person is a tough issue and really hard to do. He's not the kind of person though who, if he ever wrote a lemon (lol), would go on and on about the ecstasy of it all. He's telling this story in a narrative way about how he was seduced one night by a young girl he'd never met. That's pretty risqué if you ask me.
I am a yaoi fan, but I know fangirls can be annoying. I'm nothing like that. At all. :)
The scenario was out there, but it could happen in an alternate universe. Tear was alone and Jade was there, bored, so something happened. Trust me, I've read stories that have FAR WORSE scenarios than mine. The ones I've read are "Hi my name is blah let's have sex okay done". That's pathetic. At least Jade had thought process and hesitations.
Thank you all for your reviews and I appreciate every bit of feedback. I don't know if I can write another with these two, seeing how difficult it is to grasp the concept, but maybe something else. I enjoyed hearing back from you all, and hopefully after you 5 have read this, I can take it off so more people can read the story clearly.