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The Darkness of Your Heart

By: NecroQueen
folder Kingdom Hearts › Het - Male/Female
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 3
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Disclaimer: I do not own Kingdom Hearts, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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The first chapter of my first story!

Disclaimer: I obviously don't own Kingdom Hearts, any of the characters, or anything of such value.

Notes: This is a work in progress so things are subject to change. Also, I know I'm not the best of writers, but I couldn't handle not seeing anything original for so long. If anyone with more skills wants to take my idea and make it better, by all means, please do so. Just please don't flame. It's my first, and probably only story. By the way, I forgot to put it in the description, but there's M/M, obviously.

In this chapter: Anti-Sora/Sora lemon

“Heeyah! It’s over!” Sora yelled as he slammed his keyblade into Dr. Finkelstein’s Creation. Even though Jack and Goofy weren’t much help as usual, this fight seemed to be going pretty smooth; too smooth for Sora’s taste. He decided to speed things up a bit and use his clothes’ special powers.

“Give me strength!” was his cry as he expected his clothes to change a different color and help him end this boring fight faster. Something went wrong though, terribly wrong. Instead of becoming faster, stronger, and colorful, Sora was suddenly shrouded in darkness. He looked around to try and get his bearings, yet was discouraged when he found nothing. “Donald! Goofy! Jack!” flooded out of his lips to no answer.

Sora tried looking around again and, at last, something caught his eye. A short distance away was what seemed to be another person, but something was very strange about them. Sora immediately noticed that the eyes were bright yellow and he could only see a faint outline of the other being, even though his eyes had adjusted by this point. Also, the other person seemed to have much trouble standing still. They were constantly looking around and fidgeting; that was, until their eyes landed on Sora. This, Sora knew, could not be a good situation.

“Who are you?” Sora questioned while trying to summon his keyblade to no avail. The other’s only answer was a big, cheesy smile, which he immediately recognized as his own. The other person, if it was even a person, then proceeded to pounce toward him on hands and feet. They quickly knocked Sora over before staring at him face to face while pinning him down. Being so close, Sora got a better look at the other being. What he saw shocked him.

The other thing, for now he knew it wasn’t human, looked exactly like him in every way. The only differences were the yellow eyes and darkness. It looked as if a heartless had been modeled directly after him. There was one difference though: this thing was much stronger than any heartless.

“Get off me!” he screamed as he tried to push it off. Instead the thing showed its true strength by tightening its grip on Sora and lashing his face with its sharp claws. Sora cried out, more in shock than pain, and lay stunned for a second. The thing took this opportunity to clue Sora in on its goal. It quickly unzipped its pants and pulled out its engorged member before lunging forward so it was in Sora’s face. Sora got the clue, so he whimpered and swallowed hard in response. The tip was shoved up to the bottom of his nose, which let him take in the vile odor his alter ego’s precum gave off.

Suddenly, the creature backed down into its original position just long enough so Sora could see the twisted version of his own goofy smile before it violently picked him up and threw him on his stomach. He let out a loud pained moan as his lower jaw cracked onto the ground. This only made the creature more excited and pleased with its choice of direction.

Not long after that, Sora felt flashes of pain ripping down his back as the creature ripped his top, not to mention his skin, to shreds. Each time he winced and whimpered, as much from humiliation as from pain. As soon as the creature finished the shredding, it picked Sora up by the hair, ripped his shirt off from the front, and slammed him back down onto the ground. This emitted another pleasing cry for the creature’s ears.

Before moving on to completely unclothing Sora, the creature ran its claws slowly down Sora’s already bleeding back. After the satisfying cry of pain, the creature scooted down to work on Sora’s pants. Without using its claws, it simply grabbed them and ripped them off using its awesome strength. There he was, the person owning the heart that the creature had been born of, laying naked and helpless under it. Finally, the real fun could begin.

The creature began twitching from excitement before deciding its next move. It soon decided that Sora’s ass needed some scars to go along with his face and back. It slowly and deliberately dug its claws into the meat. The claws made their way downward until they finally reached a hole. The creature brutally shoved one claw up the hole, which caused Sora to jerk his head up and let out a full on scream.

The creature kept up this action for awhile, before grabbing Sora’s hair again so it could see the look on his face. There were tears flowing out of his eyes and minor sobs escaping his throat. Still, the creature had much more to do before it was satisfied. It abruptly removed the blood covered claw and lashed the other side of his face. When that only caused a gasp, the creature got frustrated.

It wasted no more time with games and quickly got to the main event. The creature took hold of its throbbing cock and used all it’s might to bury it in the boy’s tight exit. Sora’s head came up once more, accompanied by a blood curdling scream and a look that went beyond pain. The creature started twitching again and quickly lashed his back a few times. It pulled itself almost completely out before shoving itself back in with amazing force. Sora felt something tear inside, which put him in so much pain he could not even make a sound.

The creature almost immediately felt the passage become more lubricated, which made it upset until it realized that it was Sora’s blood. Though Sora had no control over producing the natural lubrication, the creature still punished him by clawing the back of his neck and arms. It kept going faster and harder until it finally pulled out. Sora felt a moment of relief, but the moment was short lived.

The creature slammed Sora on his back and shoved its penis back into Sora’s face. This time was worse though. This time, the creature was cumming. The seed as jet black as the rest of the creature, and there was enough to douse Sora’s entire face. It stung his eyes, matted his hair, and ran into his mouth. The taste was the worst part. It tasted worse than anything Sora could have possibly imagined.

The creature scratched at Sora’s chest for good measure and, finally, left a huge gash in his balls before scampering away. After, writhing from the pain in his most sensitive area, Sora curled up into a ball and vomited before crying himself to sleep. The creature had successfully freed itself from the darkest depths of his heart and punished him for keeping it prisoner there. Now, it was time to punish all the other light in Sora’s life.

When Sora awoke, he was back in Halloween Town, but he was still naked except for his shoes. He saw his friends gathered around him with shocked looks on their faces. One attempt to get up made him realize just how bad his wounds were. Not long after, the embarrassment of being naked and dirty in front of everyone set in. Tears began to well up again.

“What happened?” Goofy questioned in horror.

“We saw some strange thing that looked like you run off to the hill and disappear!” Donald exclaimed with the same shocked look on his face. He then added, “We took care of that monster,” as if Sora cared. Sora still lay curled up and sobbing.

Jack finally got some sense and suggested that they take him to the lab so Sally and the doctor could clean him up and mend his wounds. They carefully picked Sora up, trying not to grimace at the smell or his haggard condition, and carried him off. After getting a bath, medical attention, and rest, Sora returned to a semi normal, but still humiliated state.

“We have to go see master Yen Sid and ask him about this. I want to find that thing and kill it myself,” Sora’s rage had fully set in. He then added, “I just hope I get to it before it can harm anyone else.”
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