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for Sweet Blue

by Jameta

person ze hunta wit ze luva
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa
person Kosetsu
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spell-check, please. Did you type this up in Notepad/Wordpad or something? What's with all the random breaks and missing sentence fragments?

Otherwise, not bad, but I do wish you had put a little more description into that "first kiss" paragraph.
person tash1021
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u have to continue!!!!!!!!
u rarely see ruto and link togeter and i love them so much
please do more link and ruto
=puppy eyes=
person Twilight Princess
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this coupling in Zelda more han any others!!! Actually, I'm okay with ANY coupling in Zelda, but this one is my favorite!!!
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ljkjlj
person Mr. Crash
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This stuff is fucking HILARIOUS...That's bad for you. This is a pretty crappy lemon with an insane premise that doesn't even feature a good sex scene. However, I fully support this because it became a _great_ MST. Congrats, and keep up the good work. ;-)
person Black Dragoon
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is really good, it would be great if you continued it. It is a great story, and could become a great novel. I give it a 10 out of 10. First rate.
person ryu
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm, while it seems more used in third point of view, i still like this, since i dont see too many fics with Ruto/Link parings. This definently is good, and hope to see more of this in the future
person DeadeyeDave
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad...fellow FFN author here.

Would you mind terribly if I MST'd this? NO? GREAT! WOOOOOOOOO!

Kidding, kidding...just give a shout if there's a problem.
person link fan
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
finish the story or continu on im getting to like it